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|nominated=00:53 3 December 2010 (UTC)
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#{{User|Bowser's luma}} It has the "wrong verb tense" template on it, and that is against the rules for a FA.
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Has a tense template.
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them!


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#{{User|Bowser's luma}} Since Tucayo fixed the tense and such, it's now fine. Merci boucoup Tucayo (and I leave you speaking French to a Mexican...)
#{{user|Tucayo}} - Oh yes, I need to vote here XP per BL. Sil vous plait. Wait...
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Oh yes. Merci. PS I can't speak French, and Tucayo, um, don't create passive sentences.
#{{User|Gamefreak75}} - Sono molto bellissimo ancora.
#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} Per tout. :)


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Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}}
Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}}


Wait, how come this article does not show up on [[MarioWiki:Featured Articles|this]] page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}}
Wait, how come this article does not show up on [[MarioWiki:Featured articles|this]] page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}}
 
65: There is no tense template. Instead, we have a blue one. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}}
 
I'll fix the demonstratives thing. {{user|Tucayo}}
 
It seems as if the verb tense template was changed to a different rewrite template, but still, that's against the rules. {{User|Bowser's luma}}
 
All problems have been solved. It was written terribly {{user|Tucayo}}

Latest revision as of 11:59, September 14, 2016

Honeyhive Galaxy[edit]

Honeyhive Galaxy was nominated to be unfeatured at 00:53 3 December 2010 (UTC).

Honeyhive Galaxy failed unfeaturing requirements at 00:00, 20 December 2010, and is currently able to be renominated.

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  1. Bowser's luma (talk) Since Tucayo fixed the tense and such, it's now fine. Merci boucoup Tucayo (and I leave you speaking French to a Mexican...)
  2. Tucayo (talk) - Oh yes, I need to vote here XP per BL. Sil vous plait. Wait...
  3. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Oh yes. Merci. PS I can't speak French, and Tucayo, um, don't create passive sentences.
  4. Gamefreak75 (talk) - Sono molto bellissimo ancora.
  5. MrConcreteDonkey (talk) Per tout. :)

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Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

Wait, how come this article does not show up on this page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

65: There is no tense template. Instead, we have a blue one. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

I'll fix the demonstratives thing. Tucayo (talk)

It seems as if the verb tense template was changed to a different rewrite template, but still, that's against the rules. Bowser's luma (talk)

All problems have been solved. It was written terribly Tucayo (talk)

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