Talk:Tanoomba
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(This is my first time using a discussion page, so I apologize in advance if I mess something up.) I don't know how best to explain my grievance, but, the Super Mario-kun section is kind of a hot mess. Some parts feel too professional and involved in its description of this one chapter of a gag manga, yet other parts feel not specific enough? I wish I could take out a red pen and directly point out every bit that made me go "huh??" like After the attack, the Tanoomba cries for forgiveness. It first transforms into a Shroob, which the Mario Bros. disapprove of grrAAHHHHH what does that even mean!! This paragraph either needs three sentences added or half of them cut. --Mr. Conkdor (talk) 19:00, May 29, 2023 (EDT)
