MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Super Mario Galaxy 2

Super Mario Galaxy 2

Support

1. Mario Fan 123 (talk) - It's a very good article, well written, great gameplay section, many images, good story, links... It's perfect, and I think it deserves to be a Featued Article.
2. Toadwell (talk)

Oppose

1. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) First, my complaint with the story. The story section of the article doesn't really tell the story near the end of the section. It just shows "when the player does this" and switches back and forth from "the player" and "Mario" and it feels more like a gameplay and what gets unlocked section rather than a story. Second, the gameplay features section is a mess. Information is all over the place. An example of this is when it mentions hubs, then it goes immediately into the number of stars in the game. It also doesn't contain a list of powerups from this game, separately from the other items, much like Super Mario Galaxy does. I think that's about it.
2. Baby Mario Bloops (talk) - Seriously, not ready yet. The images are very plentiful at the beginning, but the bottom half of the article is just image-less. Also, per all that BLOF said.

Comments

The article may need a Controls/Gameplay section. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

Baby Mario Bloops: The bottom of the article is image-less because that part of the article is mostly composed of lists. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

So? We can add an image of the enemy at the top of the list. Just like the "New Enemies" section. But we can add an image of the E3 revealing. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)