User talk:Yoshitron
A Sample Shroom Review
Hi,and welcome to this month's issue of The Shroom!Today I will be reviewing the slightly-new Nintendo DS game Mario and Luigi:Bowser's Inside Story!
Mario and Luigi:Bowser's Inside Story is yet another M&L RPG.Some basic plotlines follow.
Gameplay
Mario and Luigi:Bowser's Inside Story,or Mario and Luigi RPG3,has average gameplay ability.Using the Nintendo DS,players move their characters using the Control Pad.This aspect is unique,however.Players can control not only Mario and Luigi,but Bowser as well!Mario and Luigi still have their Special Moves,and so does Bowser! A and B are used to jump,normally,for Mario and Luigi.X and Y are used to make Bowser punch and Breathe Fire (he can't jump).All in all,it is pretty decent.
Graphics
The graphics are also rather average,just like most other Mario RPG games.It is 2-D inside Bowser,but '3-D' outside of him.Not too shabby!The battle sequence is normal,the enemies are based of such things like vitamins and biffidus.Mario and Luigi strike a humorous dance when it is the other character's turn.Ah,Nintendo.
Story Mode
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORYLINES I HAVE EVER SEEN!From the hilarious beginning to the part where Mario and Luigi get flying out of Bowser,the plot is NOT a letdown.Mario,Luigi,and Bowser keep attaining new Field and Special Moves,eventually trigering a cutscene.This never,EVER gets old.
Other Modes
Other modes other than the storyline are okay,but most need potential.The only place Mario and Luigi can go for extra challenges is the Challenge Node.There you can only do the 99-Block Challenge and the Special Move area.One of my personal favorites is the Gauntlet.It lets you battle stronger memories of bosses!You end up gaining more than you spent doing it.But in the end,the other modes are severely lacking.
Summary
Mario and Luigi:Bowser's Inside Story is a more toward excellent(but decent)RPG.This one has its fans,but it would personally not be the game I want the most.Its a great game,and so I rate Mario and Luigi:Bowser's Inside Story an 8.5.
YoshiTron
19:35, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
Genius review
I like it. Your style could use some slight tweaking though. A). space after punctuation. . , : etc. B) Try writing it a bit more like an article. Go a bit more for details, rather than emotions. e.g. "THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORYLINES I HAVE EVER SEEN!" It could be improved to say: "This storyline was probably the best one I have ever seen!" Slight modifications make a good review amazing. And the only reason I'm not writing yet is because I haven't figured out where to write for. Back to the original point; your article is very good (I haven't played the game, so it's good to know how someone else likes it), but just add some more information (e.g. funniest quote) about it to make the article even better. GG445 
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Rules
Hi everybody!Feel free to comment,but I do have a few rules:
- No swearing(please)
- No trolling
- No editing the RP.(Unless you are Nixonia)If you have a request on what you want to happen, please just post it in the comments!
Thanks!
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ADD YOUR COMMENTS!!!
Hi,everybody,I'm Yoshitron!Right now,my main "mini-project"is an RP with my friend user:Nixonia.Read! Other to-do's:
- Expand RP
- Try to get auto-confirmed
- Get more acquainted with the wiki
Thank you for checking my site and have fun!
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Here are my most Visited User Pages/Talk:
Yoshitron's Main Talk Page
Hello,everybody!This is my MAIN talk page area,where you can leave comments,questions,etc.Nixonia and I are writing an RP together(see below).Hope for some more!If you need anything,please type it in the space below!Thanks,and bye!
- Oh,people,I need help.How do you get pictures on this?If any body helps,please leave your username and I'll leave credit to you!Thank you SO much for everything!CHECK!Thank you again to User:Young Master Luma!
- Also,I wanted to put only the Extra Provided Space as 1.1 under the main talk page.Does anybody know how to do that?Please!I need help!CHECK!Thank you to User:Young Master Luma for fixing this up for me!
- User Talk:Kinggoomba has the same address as me... because he's my little brother!(Mr bones gave him permission.)
- Hey dude, Check out my New-and-Improved homepage! -User Talk:IandaM
Extra Provided Space
- Hey YoshiTron, it's me, Iggy K's B3! why don't you talk on my User talk?
'(If anymore space is needed,add some,please!)'
I Need Help On...
- Getting pictures(User:Young Master Luma)
- Labling things with decimals(User:Young Master Luma)
Some of my favorite images
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Mario Games Rating List
Hello!I'm here to rate some of the most well-known Mario games.Yours might be missing,I'm sorry,but these are my true favorites!Enjoy!(If you want a game to be rated,leave a comment in the space provided,please!)
- Super Mario Bros. *Rating:2/5
I like some classics but not really this one.The Overworld theme is okay,but then it gets extremely annoying after a while.Not exactly the best...(Remember,these are my opinions,so if you don't agree,feel free to leave a comment!)
- New Super Mario Bros. (REGULAR) *Rating:3/5
Great graphics,and witty ideas are what make this game one of the best Nintendo DS games.Unfortunately,they're balanced out by repetitive gameplay.(Come ON, Peach!Can't you get out that Golf Club and whack Bowser Jr. back where he came from?!)And plus,the last boss is PATHETIC!
- Paper Mario:The Thousand-Year Door *Rating:4.2/5 (Sorry for being so exact!)
A very nice RPG-style!From a great storyline,to memorable characters,this is almost as good as Mario gets!The gameplay at times can be a bit difficult (like the Glitz Pit!Well,it's not hard,but it sure is annoying!),but excellent nonetheless!The final boss,the Shadow Queen,is a too tough,but the music is fantastic!
- Super Paper Mario *Rating:4/5
Pixls are the new addition,along with flipping.It IS a little rushed,as Nixonia says.But what's not to love about this game?Except for the dreaded 29-or-so block challenge in the Land of the Cragnons,basically Chapter 5.Also,if you answer incorrectly in some questions,you could get a Game Over!
RP Summary
9/12/10 Yoshitron:Onto Chapter 6!Here,the main event is the Costa Luna Hotel explosion.Nobody knows this,but the explosion was set by the boy's employer.He was trying to get Lyn(and hopefully more contenders),in the blast.The boy,his allies,and Lyn,ironically,survive,but Montaec and many other innocent people did not.The story's heating up,so you don't want to miss a thing!YoshiTron 22:12, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
9/12/10 Nixonia: Meh, when's the awesome parts coming up, huh? XD Well, yeah, I just added a character named Carraine this week! She's obviously created by me, and if you want to know more about her, just check the list at the bottom! To note all of you who are reading the RP and YOSHITRON, nobody knows Ace's name except for Kuraima, Clarice, Oilman, Timeman, Arma, Arthur, and Lyn. But to give you guys a 'hint' on the next update, Ace will be completely conscious for the next few hours ... NOT in real life, just in the RP ... You know, our RP has different hours than us because ... well ... FOR OBVIOUS REASONS. I don't want to stress myself just by making a summary! Here's some info if you don't really understand our RP:
Ace - A not-so-normal teen who almost gets killed by everyone. She'll try to hide her real emotions -mostly- by smiling widely and grinning. Ace may look pretty young and weak, but think again! She always brings around her over-sized hammer and when she hammers the ground in mid-air, you're in for the 'major earthquake'!
Oilman - A typical nonsense-talking maintenance robot designed to power up his siblings with his self-generated oil. (Yes, he makes the oil inside of him.) He can talk pretty fast when he wants to, and it seems that he has a thing or two for Ace.
Timeman - A prototype robot who began functioning when he was not completely finished. He's mostly the irritable and rude robot, and he seems that he doesn't appreciate anything about his siblings -especially Oilman. Many of them mention him as a 'little kid' or 'lil' bro' because he's just another prototype like Protoman. But, he always seem to enjoy being on time, go according to his 'schedule' and research with his friend, Ace.
Arma - A large raven with unusual bright, red eyes. She loves to be at Ace's side all the time, and she can shape-shift into anything in the same volume. Nothing bigger, nothing smaller.
The 'boy' - A mysterious young male who also experienced everything at a young age. He appears to work for a higher authority, but this 'authority' seems to be nothing but a dark shadow who shows up when he/she is needed to. The 'boy's' duty is to murder Timeman in order for him to become a regular human.
Mimi - Mimi is a Super Paper Mario character and her info can be found by clicking on her name right here.
Montaec - Like Oilman, he's another non-sense-talking freak who works for the 'boy' and dislikes his duty. It appears that there's something between him and Lyn - Maybe they're siblings, or something else.
Lyn - An aqua-haired girl who seems to know a few things about Ace, but Ace doesn't know anything about her. She has a bird as her right-hand partner like Ace, and is named Sybyrr.
Sybyrr - Like Arma, she can shape-shift, but in a volume slightly larger than Arma's. She can use her slash attack as her deadly weapon.
Arthur - Clarice's friend and clock creator. He loves to fiddle around with watches and clocks a lot, and appears to know a few things about fixing robots. He currently lives in Taitle, but nobody knows what has happened to him right after he forced Ace and her friends out of the place.
Clarice - The dark-silent type of woman who dislikes socializing too much. She loves to paint Japanese symbols and spend her free time drinking tea with Miss Rin.
Miss Rin - Since her appearance in our RP isn't really much, nobody really knows about her. She's very sensitive and shy and doesn't like anything about these tournaments.
Kuraima - A bodyguard who over-body-guards Clarice too much and stutters a lot, especially when socializing in front of her. He doesn't like separating from her, that's for sure.
Carraine - We're just getting to know her, since I've typed so little about her. Though, she's a tomboy female who appears to stay close to Ragdoll a lot.
Ragdoll - A no-soul creature -or person, Carraine says- who can understand any language, but can't speak it. He replies to people in a very strange manner and mood. Once again, I haven't written much about him.
Do enjoy as we update more of our RP! :D -Nixonia
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Don't add opinions or any such info on articles please, like what you did in the Fiery Jinx article. Also, please don't dump edits on the bottom of the page - if you want to add info, add it with the rest. 
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Sorry
I forgot about that. Make a page called User:Yoshitron/talkarchive, and paste this code there {| class="infobox" style="float:right;border:gold double 1px;background-color:silver;padding: 0.5em; margin: 0.5em 0.5em 1em;width:300px" |- ! align="center" style="font-family:Arial; font-size: 10pt" | [[User talk:Mr bones|Mr Bones Evil Talk Archive Castle]]''' ---- |- | style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; font-size: 10pt" | *'''[[User talk:Yoshitron/Archive 1|Archive 1]]''' |}
an go to your talk page, at the top write {{User:Yoshitron/talkarchive}}
Count Bonsula I need blood...
15:53, 6 September 2010 (UTC)
Oups, okay here is the correct code
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Still here
Yup, I'm still here. I'm playing some SMRPG, which is an awesome game. What are you up to?
Young M. Luma 
••• 13:23, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Right now I don't need help with anything, though I'll be sure to tell you if I do! Do you want me to make you one of those infoboxes about yourself, or perhaps put a background color to your talkpage?
Young M. Luma ••• 13:29, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Done, there you go. In your infoboxes you can put stuff like... check out my userpage.
Young M. Luma ••• 14:25, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Here; your very own infobox! Put it on your userpage, or on your talk page. Copy the code of it:
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| Real name: I'm NOT telling! | |
| Gender: Male | |
| Age: 12 | |
| Country: Massachusetts,USA | |
| Favorite game: Too many!=) | |
| Favorite game character: Yoshi | |
| Friends:Young Master Luma,Nixonia | |
Just remember to fill in the blanks! Young M. Luma ••• 14:48, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Yup
Sure, I'd love to be friends! Here's my box: |-
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This user is a friend of Bowser's luma. |
Next time, can you please add your comment at the bottom of my page (using the plus at the top of the page). Not a big deal, but it's easier for me that way. Just like me - make someone my friend then yell at them. ;) 
Bowser's luma
22:35, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Sure!
I'd be happy to be friends. I also like Yoshi and I'd probably say that my favorite game with the main star as Yoshi is probably Yoshi Story. What's yours?
EGG Yoshi
Other Stuff
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The Super Mario Wiki
Hello Yoshitron,
I'm from the "german" Mario Wiki. It's not a Wiki like this, it's from wikia. This wiki is also better than the german Wikia. I would ask you who construct this Wiki?
PS: Galaxy_2 consist of two people: Vinc and Alex and i'm Vinc Galaxy 2 11:28, 13 September 2010 (UTC)File:SignaturGalaxy2.jpg (Vinc)
Great thanks Yoshitron ---Galaxy 2 06:22, 14 September 2010 (UTC)File:SignaturGalaxy2.jpg (Vinc)
Hey
How ya doing? I also play the Kirby and Mario series! And todays my birthday! OH! IO! Ohio Rocks! Sept. 13 2010
10, only 2 years younger than you!
I want to be your friend. For the userbox, just use a picture of Sailor Hat Waddle Dee! :D
Hi,there!
Hello!Have you been having fun on Super Mario Wiki?Thanks for those comments there!Kinggoomba 20:44, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
You're very welcome!Kinggoomba 20:49, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
sure!
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Images Smaller
First off, please post on my actualy talk page, not the Archive I just made. You can just make a new section on my current page. There is 100% chance I'll see it there, but on the archive, there is the possibility I might miss it. Anyway, you can make the pixel level smaller. If a picture's coding looks like this: [[File:bowserslumapi.jpg|thumb|right|200px]] it will look like the first image.
If you change the pixel size, shown with the 200px, you can make it smaller (or larger). Typing [[File:bowserslumapi.jpg|thumb|right|100px]] will make this second image,
which is noticably smaller. There you go! How to make an image smaller. If you need any more help, just ask. Have a good time editing and such! Bowser's luma 23:24, 15 September 2010 (UTC)
- No problem. By the way, if you didn't assume this you have to change the name of the image, of course. The "bowserslumapi" I used as an example was just my logo. Anyway, glad I could help. GTG, bye!
Bowser's luma
23:28, 15 September 2010 (UTC)
Shop of Moneyness
I would really like to buy something from your shop, it could be like a minigame on MW, and I could have my own shop at User:Young Master Luma/Shop (please don't create it for me), but I wanna know if it's alright to have pages just for that... Also, it would be awesome to be able to earn some money myself, so maybe my shop will be like... a pet store! Pet Goombas, Goomb-Os, Poochies... The possibilities are endless! I like the idea! I've just gotta do some research on whether it's allowed to have a whole page for that or not first.
Young M. Luma ••• 15:24, 17 September 2010 (UTC)
Nah, I'm going to sleep, it's really late over here. Bye, and g'night.
Young M. Luma ••• 21:30, 17 September 2010 (UTC)
Re: A Sample 'Shroom Review
- I direct the Fake News. The review should go to Tucayo.
- You have to send this on the forums. This way, we can keep it private before the release date.
Friends
Sure.
This Is War 19:57, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
Shroom
Hi! To sign up I just need you to [http://forum.mariowiki.com/index.php?action=pm;sa=send;u=557 PM me the draft of your section,a nd then I'll submit it to review by the rest of the staff :) Thanks and good luck! --
™ The 'Shroom 20:14, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
