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Dark‎ Fawful
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== help ==
HHelp me!!!! i cannot edit anything! the only things that i can edit are talk pages! I can't even edit my userpage! Why? Can you help me? [[User:Mesuxelf|Mesuxelf]] 09:38, 17 January 2011 (EST)

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Rules- LISTEN TO THEM!!!... Please.

Hey, excited users! I have some simple rules here:

  • Please no swearing- I just hate when people constantly swear so much that I can't even understand what they're talking about. I don't mind if you use "stupid" or something like that, but be appropriate. If you do swear I'll give you a friendly warning and hopefully you won't do it again if you did swear.
  • Be nice to me and the rest of the users. That's pretty basic, right?
  • Comments go at the BOTTOM of the page.
  • Don't insult Fawful- He's my favorite character, even though he's a psycho green-guy. Don't insult Hammer Bro either- he's my 2nd favorite.
  • Do not insult pie- it tastes good.
  • Don't put things on my talk page to tick me off- you've been warned!
  • No spamming, no flaming.
  • Be yourself.
  • Don't ask me for my phone number. Here it is: 555-676-1234. Yep. That's it.
  • Have a nice day!

--Fawfulfury65

Your phone number

I tried to call you to a party with it, but I ended talking with the Soviet Russia Post Center. Something's wrong :/ --Mario Fan 123 - Mario's craazy fan! Artwork of Mario in his classic victory pose, from Super Mario 64. 19:31, 9 January 2011 (EST)

Passive Talk War

Passive talk is basically where you place the predicate before the subject. For example:

"Out of the mine exploded Wario" is passive talk.

"Wario exploded out of the mine" is active talk.

Generally speaking, active talk is preferred over passive talk because not only it prevents problems such as misplaced modifiers, but is more exciting for the reader to read. It also sounds more awkward than active talk. Passive writing is great if it is a preferred style, but for informing readers, active is better. Something like this was written in the articles:

"Ahead of the monkeys is an abyss." I changed it to this:

"An abyss is ahead of the monkeys."

BabyLuigiFire.pngRay Trace(T|C)

Passive talk is still grammatically correct, so it's not a serious issue. I even left some passive talk in the Cog Jog article. Just make sure the majority of the sentences are active.

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OHAI!

Gah, you archived without responding. >:[

I'm still around. Sorry I haven't talked to you in a while, but I've been very busy with mock interviews, mock exams, revision, and most recently recovering from a head injury and Christmas and New Year celebrations. So, hi Ms Sysop of CHORTLES!!!! Unlike a few users, I shall not rename myself to appease Plumber The Great Waluigi!! It's also my 16th birthday on January 16! 30STM.PNG This Is War 30STM.PNG 13:29, 10 January 2011 (EST)

Re:Friends

Ok cool! Here is my userbox. |-

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A sprite of Supremo for the signature of Supremo78

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Worlds?

Hey, I have a question about Worlds 1 - 6 under the Places category to the left here...cuz, the first World 1 says "Many Mario games" next to it, but it also lists the World 1's from several Mario games under that as well, so I was just wondering, is there a reason for that? I mean, if there are already some World 1's from some Mario games there, then why even have the "Many Mario games" thing, instead of just listing them all out there, u know?

¡Feliz Navidad! PHOENIX (talkedits) 21:08, 10 January 2011 (EST)

Ok, like, when it gets to the "W" section, the first World 1 says "World 1 - Many Mario Games"...

¡Feliz Navidad! PHOENIX (talkedits) 21:40, 10 January 2011 (EST)

Oh, sorry, see, I just noticed that a few games were missing when it listed the ones for World 1, so I guess I actually clicked on "World 1" in "World 1 - Many Mario Games", not the "Many Mario Games" part, so I noticed some of the ones that were missing were on the disambiguation page, so I was wondering why they werent already listed under World 1...my bad...

¡Feliz Navidad! PHOENIX (talkedits) 05:46, 12 January 2011 (EST)

I think I was just trying to say, why have the first World 1 that says "Many Mario Games" if it already lists most of them under that, u know? That just seems kind of repetetive...

¡Feliz Navidad! PHOENIX (talkedits) 05:49, 12 January 2011 (EST)

Blast and Bounce.

Unless you want phone quality, then that is all I can do. I have no way of uploading pictures that someone didn't give to me. It's annoying, but at least I try my best to rely on my other wiki skills. So...yeah...if you can, add pictures to Blast and Bounce. Baby Mario Bloops

Thanks!

Now I'm getting my userboxes started! I only have three, but it's a start. For the meanwhile, my userpage is under construction. Come check it out anytime!

Dark‎ Fawful

help

HHelp me!!!! i cannot edit anything! the only things that i can edit are talk pages! I can't even edit my userpage! Why? Can you help me? Mesuxelf 09:38, 17 January 2011 (EST)