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Well I might not know Why, but I know who. It was [[User:Luigi 7|This guy.]] [[User:Walkazo|Anonymouspp]] | Well I might not know Why, but I know who. It was [[User:Luigi 7|This guy.]] [[User:Walkazo|Anonymouspp]] | ||
Some of the Pics were reused from some of the same games, plus there was too many of them getting in the way, I didn't change much to the gallery, but please, no more in the main article! [[User:Luigi 7|Luigi 7]] | Some of the Pics were reused from some of the same games, plus there was too many of them getting in the way, I didn't change much to the gallery, but please, no more in the main article! I mean, talk a look at the Part talking about Mr L, we got too many pics at that point, I think we can put of of those in the gallery. [[User:Luigi 7|Luigi 7]] | ||
== Spring Cleaning! == | == Spring Cleaning! == |
Revision as of 08:27, October 23, 2007
PAIRreview for Luigi by Gofer | ||
Accuracy | 2.0 | Its not very accurate, for example, the SM2 section state that he woke up, while in fact, it was Mario. |
Depth | 2.0 | There isn't a lot of depth. It mostly say "Blablabla Luig defeated Bowser Blablablabla. It also lack information on some of the more obscure game like Hotel Mario or When I grow up |
Grammar | 2.0 | Can't review that TOO much... But some of the sentense seem weird and there's a lot of time where the article refer directly to the reader. |
Images | 2.0 | This article is cluttered up with them. Why put two near-identical image in the same section? |
Formatting | 2.0 | There alway at least a template that bug and screw up the page, that may be just me, thought. |
Final Rating: | 10 | Overall bad/average article. Far from Fa-worthy. The article is also full of POV, useles info ("Yoshi have showed to be as good as luig on his two feets" What?) and have some pretty horendous writting (Look at King Boo in the relationshpi section for what I mean). Meh. |
Reviewer: | Gofer |
PAIRreview for Luigi by Knife | ||
Accuracy | 2.5 | Horribly inaccurate, agreeing with Gofer-hole above. |
Depth | 1.5 | Content-wise, it needs a lot of work. The relationships sections are good enough, but someone should remove a few unworthy relationships like Luigi to Wario, Luigi to DK, or Luigi to Yoshi. They don't really have much of a relationship. A few sections could be merged for the apparent lack of good content. I can understand the lack of content in the platformers series, but as for the M&L series? The sections for Luigi in the ML series could be greatly expanded. Perhaps folllow the writing style given in the last section. |
Grammar | 2.5 | Many spelling mistake, punctuation errors, etc.. The paragraphs usually only consist of 3 or 2 sentences. |
Images | 3.0 | The images could work, but with the short amount of content, they look more messy than helpful. |
Formatting | 3.5 | If you inspect the whole article, you will find a lot of them. |
Final Rating: | 13 | This article is very far from FA worthy. The main part of it that needs work is the Biography and relationship sections. I hope someone can fix it. |
Reviewer: | Knife |
Age
Is it possible that Mario and Luigi are twins, but Mario is older by X minutes? HK
- Yes. It's possible. --Son of Suns 13:33, 29 June 2006 (EDT)
Im just thinking that that is how is they how they are twins, AND one is older. (This previously unsigned comment was made by HK-47.)
Well, the Mario games don't exactly have perfect continuity. For one thing, Shy Guys, Bob-ombs, and Birdos were both dreams in SMB2, but they're real in other games. (Most likely, Mario knew about them before his dream, and that's why he dreamed about them.)
For this one, the theories are that: a) Baby Mario & Baby Luigi are different from Mario & Luigi. Highly unlikely.
b) Mario's older by a few minutes. More likely.
c) Nintendo retconned the info seen in Yoshi's Island, or forgot all about it when they described Luigi as the younger. Likely, but not as likely as B.
So, either B or C. Waluigi Freak 99 14:45, 9 September 2006 (EDT)
- Well, Mario did encounter those enemies as a baby in Yoshi's Island, so it is logical that he would dream about them. Also, Nintendo did retcon Yoshi's Island in the GBA release. In the beginning of the game, instead of refering to Mario and Luigi as twins (like in SNES version), Mario and Luigi are simply called brothers. -- Son of Suns
Funny how people don't realise that twins can't be born at the exact same time. Of course one is older than the other. It can be by minutes or hours.
- Yoshi Master
In my opinion, I think Nintendo made a mistake when they said they were twins. Paper Jorge
- I think so too. In the Japanese games, it clearly states Mario is older that Luigi, and most likely not twins. Marcelagus (T • C • E)
And then there is every game out there that retcons what you just said. Angry Sun 15:00, 13 May 2007 (EDT)
I think... That if they were teins they would be called the mario twins... User:Remiel
Images
If anyone can help finding images, I will be happy :). Paper Jorge
Mr. L Merge
AnimeLuigi.jpg - deleted?
Why has this picture been deleted?? --Grandy02 06:56, 22 June 2007 (EDT)
- I myself am not sure. According to the deletion log, KPH2293 (talk), who is VERY trustworthy and all that, deleted it on the claims that it was unused, despite the fact that the page links to it even now. It's no problem, though; I'll just re-upload the image. (And by the way, KPH also deleted File:Staringcontest?.gif and File:Luigitennis.jpeg on the same terms; both of these images are still linked through from the article. I'll ask him why he did this...) YELLOWYOSHI398
- Just so you know, I noticed many Luigi Pictures that are on Luigi's page that say "No pages Link to this file". However, they are on Luigi's page, yet they the image says that they are not on this page. Something might be wrong with this page, but I don't know. My Bloody Valentine
Super Mario 64 DS
May I ask why the Super Mario 64 DS section is placed after Paper Mario? Isn't it a remake of Super Mario 64, and thus occupies the same spot in the timeline? Dinosaur bob 13:27, 1 July 2007 (EDT)
- Actually it's matter of opinion. I personally think the "remake" is in the same continuity as the original and they both happened at different times. the DS adventure could have happened after Paper Mario and the original happened before for all we know. -- WarioLoaf (talk) 01:37, 8 September 2007 (EDT)
According to MarioWiki: Chronology, remakes should be listed in a biography in the same section the original would occupy. This is an official policy. -- Son of Suns
Question
Why was most of the Pics removed? XzelionETC
I don't know, but somebody has to put them here before deletion. PP
Well I might not know Why, but I know who. It was This guy. Anonymouspp
Some of the Pics were reused from some of the same games, plus there was too many of them getting in the way, I didn't change much to the gallery, but please, no more in the main article! I mean, talk a look at the Part talking about Mr L, we got too many pics at that point, I think we can put of of those in the gallery. Luigi 7
Spring Cleaning!
THIS has a few broken links and stuff. Can someone go over it so it looks like a great Featured Article? I saw a broken link and I see too many red links. Minimariolover10
- It is gonna take a lot of work to get this article to FA status. It will take many users, and probably many months for that to happen. -- Son of Suns
Well at least fix the link. Minimariolover10
- And put the Images back on! PP
- We're too late. PP
Quote
I think "I hope she made us lotsa of spaghetti!" from Hotel Mario would make a much better main quote, anyone agree? Glowsquid I reckon I'm-a Luigi umber one! is betterFile:MP8 DryBones.jpgSuper Yoshi10Lookey This
Relationships
I've removed Donkey Kong and added E. Gadd instead, I know there's more to it, but can someone add to it?