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==Re:Small Mario==
==Re:Small Mario==
I've gotten rid of instances that mention the three games in the Super Mario Run section, and frankly we don't need to mention every single inconsistency comparing this game to three unrelated games pertaining to what occurs in the power-up, as it bloats the page and makes reading harder. I've noticed you added this back without any reason. If you need to clarify why you disagree with my edits, please do so. {{User:Baby Luigi/sig}} 22:05, 22 May 2018 (EDT)
I've gotten rid of instances that mention the three games in the Super Mario Run section, and frankly we don't need to mention every single inconsistency comparing this game to three unrelated games pertaining to what occurs in the power-up, as it bloats the page and makes reading harder. I've noticed you added this back without any reason. If you need to clarify why you disagree with my edits, please do so. {{User:Baby Luigi/sig}} 22:05, 22 May 2018 (EDT)
:When talking about gameplay, [[MarioWiki:Manual_of_Style#Verb_tense|we always use present tense for verbs]]. Only in nonfictional scenarios is where past or future tense is used. Additionally, I feel the extra verbiage in the article is unnecessary. Readers can gain from the "they are defeated in one hit" line from a section as being the weakest form without further explaining that this form is their weakest form. I also think we don't need to compare their past appearances this much in the article, which again, readers can learn from reading the sentence and already drawing out their own inferences. {{User:Baby Luigi/sig}} 23:40, 22 May 2018 (EDT)

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Re:Small Mario

I've gotten rid of instances that mention the three games in the Super Mario Run section, and frankly we don't need to mention every single inconsistency comparing this game to three unrelated games pertaining to what occurs in the power-up, as it bloats the page and makes reading harder. I've noticed you added this back without any reason. If you need to clarify why you disagree with my edits, please do so. BabyLuigiFire.pngRay Trace(T|C) 22:05, 22 May 2018 (EDT)

When talking about gameplay, we always use present tense for verbs. Only in nonfictional scenarios is where past or future tense is used. Additionally, I feel the extra verbiage in the article is unnecessary. Readers can gain from the "they are defeated in one hit" line from a section as being the weakest form without further explaining that this form is their weakest form. I also think we don't need to compare their past appearances this much in the article, which again, readers can learn from reading the sentence and already drawing out their own inferences. BabyLuigiFire.pngRay Trace(T|C) 23:40, 22 May 2018 (EDT)