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Mario Kart: Super Circuit

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1. Ashley and Red (talk) The article has flowery writing ( The objective in this game is to place first in the races, as with most racing games. Each race has eight contestants, all trying to win. The player can pick up Item Boxes which contain items. Using these items are very helpful, but computer-controlled characters can also use items.); Obviously things are explained I don't know why (Objective is get in first place... Oh, really? I didn't tought that). The article itself, with exception of the Characters section is bad writing (There are lots of dots where shouldn't be). For me, this article and specially the first and 2nd sections are most uneeded info.

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1. Baby Luigi (talk) I wouldn't call this article "flowery writing". Sure, maybe it has some Captain Obvious points (which I fixed) but it's all objective and straight to the point: I don't see any padding. I don't see the bad writing either; your point about "too many dots where it shouldn't be"? Do you mean periods or bullet points? Your points are very vague and I just don't see any problem with this article. Of course I wrote most of this....................so I might be a bit biased about it.
2. Yoshi876 (talk) Per Baby Luigi, I wouldn't call that writing flowery.

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Also in the reception section Joao mispelled. The correct is .João. I know it 'cause this is my name :P User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig

If you read the source, that's where I got the name from. There's no accent in the name for some reason in the source. Ray Trace^(T|C) 21:20, 20 May 2014 (EDT)