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#{{User|Bowser's luma}} It has the "wrong verb tense" template on it, and that is against the rules for a FA. | #{{User|Bowser's luma}} It has the "wrong verb tense" template on it, and that is against the rules for a FA. | ||
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#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them! | |||
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Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | |||
Revision as of 21:40, December 2, 2010
Honeyhive Galaxy
Remove Featured Article Status
- Bowser's luma (talk) It has the "wrong verb tense" template on it, and that is against the rules for a FA.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk)
- BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them!
Keep Featured Article Status
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Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
