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#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Actually, MILLIONS of things are wrong with this article. That one table that describes the locations of all the Golden Bananas is absolutely horrible (in fact, I think we should get rid of all of it). It has "you's" all over it and is horribly written. You can't even understand what its telling you to do. BTW '''the article ''is'' incomplete'''. Next, the story section. The game has a long, long story. Every time you beat a level, a new cutscene can be seen. That nasty little paragraph is not enough, and it only explains a little bit of the first cutscene. Well, I can go on and on, but I don't want to fill up this whole page. | #{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Actually, MILLIONS of things are wrong with this article. That one table that describes the locations of all the Golden Bananas is absolutely horrible (in fact, I think we should get rid of all of it). It has "you's" all over it and is horribly written. You can't even understand what its telling you to do. BTW '''the article ''is'' incomplete'''. Next, the story section. The game has a long, long story. Every time you beat a level, a new cutscene can be seen. That nasty little paragraph is not enough, and it only explains a little bit of the first cutscene. Well, I can go on and on, but I don't want to fill up this whole page. | ||
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Ew, one-liners, and TWO templates (expand and rewrite). Per all | #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Ew, one-liners, and TWO templates (expand and rewrite). Per all | ||
#{{User|Reversinator}} Horribly written, in great need of extension and HAS TWO IMPROVEMENT TEMPLATES. | |||
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Revision as of 20:21, May 3, 2010
Donkey Kong 64
Support
- Raphaelraven497 (talk) This article is very long, detailed, and gives an excellent description of each concept in the game. This article is excellent.
Oppose
- LeftyGreenMario (talk) The article is long, but all the playable characters' descriptions are way too short. A huge amount of sections are extremely short. In other words, everything I mentioned needs a lot of expansion.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Actually, MILLIONS of things are wrong with this article. That one table that describes the locations of all the Golden Bananas is absolutely horrible (in fact, I think we should get rid of all of it). It has "you's" all over it and is horribly written. You can't even understand what its telling you to do. BTW the article is incomplete. Next, the story section. The game has a long, long story. Every time you beat a level, a new cutscene can be seen. That nasty little paragraph is not enough, and it only explains a little bit of the first cutscene. Well, I can go on and on, but I don't want to fill up this whole page.
- BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Ew, one-liners, and TWO templates (expand and rewrite). Per all
- Reversinator (talk) Horribly written, in great need of extension and HAS TWO IMPROVEMENT TEMPLATES.
