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{{PAIRreview | |||
|A-rating=2.0 | |||
|A-comment=Its not very accurate, for example, the SM2 section state that he woke up, while in fact, it was Mario. | |||
|D-rating=2.0 | |||
|D-comment=There isn't a lot of depth. It mostly say "Blablabla Luig defeated Bowser Blablablabla. It also lack information on some of the more obscure game like Hotel Mario or When I grow up | |||
|G-rating=2.0 | |||
|G-comment=Can't review that TOO much... But some of the sentense seem weird and there's a lot of time where the article refer directly to the reader. | |||
|I-rating=2.0 | |||
|I-comment=This article is cluttered up with them. Why put two near-identical image in the same section? | |||
|F-rating=2.0 | |||
|F-comment=There alway at least a template that bug and screw up the page, that may be just me, thought. | |||
|FR-comment=Overall bad/average article. Far from Fa-worthy. | |||
The article is also full of POV, useles info ("Yoshi have showed to be as good as luig on his two feets" What?) and have some pretty horendous writting (Look at King Boo in the relationshpi section for what I mean). Meh. | |||
|R-comment= The article is also full of POV, useles info ("Yoshi have showed to be as good as luig on his two feets" What?) and have some pretty horendous writting (Look at King Boo in the relationship section for what I mean). Meh. | |||
|signature=[[User:Gofer|Gofer]] - ''July 22, 2007, 23:20 GMT'' | |||
|titlechange=[[Luigi]]}} | |||
{{PAIRreview | |||
|A-rating=2.5 | |||
|A-comment=Horribly inaccurate, agreeing with Gofer-hole above. | |||
|D-rating=1.5 | |||
|D-comment=Content-wise, it needs a lot of work. The relationships sections are good enough, but someone should remove a few unworthy relationships like Luigi to Wario, Luigi to DK, or Luigi to Yoshi. They don't really have much of a relationship. A few sections could be merged for the apparent lack of good content. I can understand the lack of content in the platformers series, but as for the M&L series? The sections for Luigi in the ML series could be greatly expanded. Perhaps folllow the writing style given in [[Luigi#The Enigmatic Mr. L|the last section]]. | |||
|G-rating=2.5 | |||
|G-comment=Many spelling mistake, punctuation errors, etc.. The paragraphs usually only consist of 3 or 2 sentences. | |||
|I-rating=3.0 | |||
|I-comment=The images could work, but with the short amount of content, they look more messy than helpful. | |||
|F-rating=3.5 | |||
|F-comment=If you inspect the whole article, you will find a lot of them. | |||
|FR-comment=This article is very far from FA worthy. The main part of it that needs work is the Biography and relationship sections. I hope someone can fix it. | |||
|R-comment=? | |||
|signature=[[User:Knife|Knife]] - ''July 23, 2007, 20:55 GMT'' | |||
|titlechange=[[Luigi]]}} |
Revision as of 23:16, February 7, 2013
It has been decided that the Super Mario Wiki will no longer support this feature. This page is kept and protected strictly for historical purposes.
As an optional part of the renewed FA process, PAIR can help toward getting an article ready for an FA nomination and have a high enough quality to pass voting requirements, but again is not mandatory.
Panel Members
Members need to :
- be dedicated to this work & active
- be experienced and successful writers
- will respond to request for review, from Category:Review Requested asap
- refrain from extending this list past 12 for the time being
- HK-47 (talk)
- Gofer
- Pokemon DP (talk)
- Cobold (talk)
- Plumber (talk)
- Knife
- Phoenix Rider (talk)
- Xzelion (talk)
- Reversinator (talk)
- Reddragon19k
Process
This is an optional first stage for the FA process, more importantly a way to improve an article's quality over time.
Example: A user or group of users have extensive knowledge of a certain subject in the Marioverse (i.e. Game/Character) and want to improve the article to FA status.
- User(s) ask two reviewers for scores using {{PAIRreview}}, judging article on accuracy (facts), depth (details), grammar, images (# and quality), and formatting (organized) on a scale from 0-4 in .5 increments, on the talk page of the article. They should use {{PAIRrequest}} for efficiency. A final rating out of 20 is given by adding the individual ratings. Reviewers in the comments give suggestions for improvement, or what they disliked.
- Article is worked on for one week, then the same two reviewers review it again. If there are no changes after a week, the users have to seek the reviewers when they are ready for another review session, but they must wait at least one week, even if they are ready (preferably, there's always something to improve)
- Review can be justified by users working on article and by other reviewer as reasonable to be considered official, but since this is a general gist of the article's quality, and scores do not matter when nominating the article as an FA, it is not necessary to justify.
In the end, it is up to the users who want an article to be the best it can be and the reviewers to help them – they must work together.
Archive
PAIRreview for Luigi by Gofer - July 22, 2007, 23:20 GMT | ||
Accuracy | 2.0 | Its not very accurate, for example, the SM2 section state that he woke up, while in fact, it was Mario. |
Depth | 2.0 | There isn't a lot of depth. It mostly say "Blablabla Luig defeated Bowser Blablablabla. It also lack information on some of the more obscure game like Hotel Mario or When I grow up |
Grammar | 2.0 | Can't review that TOO much... But some of the sentense seem weird and there's a lot of time where the article refer directly to the reader. |
Images | 2.0 | This article is cluttered up with them. Why put two near-identical image in the same section? |
Formatting | 2.0 | There alway at least a template that bug and screw up the page, that may be just me, thought. |
Final Rating: | 10 | Overall bad/average article. Far from Fa-worthy. The article is also full of POV, useles info ("Yoshi have showed to be as good as luig on his two feets" What?) and have some pretty horendous writting (Look at King Boo in the relationshpi section for what I mean). Meh. |
Reviewer: | Gofer - July 22, 2007, 23:20 GMT |
PAIRreview for Luigi by Knife - July 23, 2007, 20:55 GMT | ||
Accuracy | 2.5 | Horribly inaccurate, agreeing with Gofer-hole above. |
Depth | 1.5 | Content-wise, it needs a lot of work. The relationships sections are good enough, but someone should remove a few unworthy relationships like Luigi to Wario, Luigi to DK, or Luigi to Yoshi. They don't really have much of a relationship. A few sections could be merged for the apparent lack of good content. I can understand the lack of content in the platformers series, but as for the M&L series? The sections for Luigi in the ML series could be greatly expanded. Perhaps folllow the writing style given in the last section. |
Grammar | 2.5 | Many spelling mistake, punctuation errors, etc.. The paragraphs usually only consist of 3 or 2 sentences. |
Images | 3.0 | The images could work, but with the short amount of content, they look more messy than helpful. |
Formatting | 3.5 | If you inspect the whole article, you will find a lot of them. |
Final Rating: | 13 | This article is very far from FA worthy. The main part of it that needs work is the Biography and relationship sections. I hope someone can fix it. |
Reviewer: | Knife - July 23, 2007, 20:55 GMT |