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Maybe it's my computer's resolution doing it, but I see the planet names are quite short in description. I see some problems with the article: pronoun antecedent agreement, tense (it needs to be present, not future), and the conjecture names, "Beginner Path" and "Expert Path" sound too subjective. It needs to be more objective. | |||
Other thank these problems, I think the article looks fine. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | |||
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Rolling Coaster Galaxy
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- Danimario9 (talk) I think the article is well written.
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Maybe it's my computer's resolution doing it, but I see the planet names are quite short in description. I see some problems with the article: pronoun antecedent agreement, tense (it needs to be present, not future), and the conjecture names, "Beginner Path" and "Expert Path" sound too subjective. It needs to be more objective.
Other thank these problems, I think the article looks fine. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
