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Proper nouns / comma splice[edit]
Thanks for adding the Red Coin sections to the Yoshi's Island articles. Next time, please remember to capitalise proper nouns, including item, enemy and object names (Chomp, Crazee Dayzee, etc.). Try also not to write each dot point as one long sentence with just commas (this is considered a comma splice), and use a period to start a new sentence where necessary.
e.g. In the same place, Yoshi must roll the Chomp Rock to reach the coins at the top of the cave. Among the coins, there are six Red Coins.
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