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==Errors== | ==Errors== | ||
*The upper-left caption redundantly refers to the Briquettes as Fryguy High's "base-baseball team", repeating "base" as a result of the word wrapping around to the left of the page. | |||
*[[Lemmy|Lemmy Koopa]] lacks a visible nose in the upper-right image. | |||
**In the upper-right caption, the second "ha" in "Ha, Ha!!!" is unnecessarily capitalized. The "neither" in the middle caption's "...and Neither will they!!!" is similarly unnecessarily capitalized, as well as the "alma" in "{{wp|Alma mater}}" and "me" in "Not Me!!!!!!" | *In the upper-right caption, the second "ha" in "Ha, Ha!!!" is unnecessarily capitalized. The "neither" in the middle caption's "...and Neither will they!!!" is similarly unnecessarily capitalized, as well as the "alma" in "{{wp|Alma mater}}" and "me" in "Not Me!!!!!!" | ||
*The caption of the bottom-left image makes a grammatical error by saying that "A few bad apples ''is'' ruining it for the whole school..." Since the subject of the sentence is multiple Fryguys, instead of one, the correct grammar would be "A few bad apples ''are'' ruining it..." | |||
*Due to it being phrased as a question, the first sentence in the bottom-right caption should end with a question mark instead of the exclamation points used. | |||
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