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[[File: CloudBurst.jpg|thumb|right|Lakitu, attacking Mario and Luigi with his [[Spiny Egg]]s.]]

'''Cloud Burst''' is an issue of [[Valiant Comics|Valiant]]'s ''[[Nintendo Comics System]]'' imprint.

==Plot Synopsis==
In the throne room of [[Princess Peach's Castle|the castle]], [[Mario]] and [[Luigi]] stumble upon Princess Toadstool interrogating [[Wooster]] about the whereabouts of [[Princess Peach's Crown|her crown]]. After learning that Wooster doesn't know where the crown is, Princess Toadstool begins to panic, if she doesn't have that crown in time for the "re-coronation" ceremony, she won't be able to be princess for an entire year; meaning [[Mushroom Kingdom|Mushroom Land]] will be completely under the control of the idiotic [[Mushroom King|King Toadstool]], who has just stumbled into the room with his tie caught in a jar of peanut butter.

As Wooster and Princess Toadstool begin helping King Toadstool get his tie loose from the jar of peanut butter, [[Toad]] suddenly rushes into the room, saying that [[Bowser]] has amassed an army in "World Three". Princess Toadstool suddenly sends Mario and Luigi out to battle Bowser and his army, thinking that Bowser was the one who stole her crown.

In a large field, Bowser is in the process of telling his [[Lakitu]] minion that someone's been robbing him, stealing [[Koopabit]]s from him and even his crown has been taken. As Bowser tells Lakitu and the rest of his troops to be on the look-out for traitors, Lakitu snickers to himself and gazes at all the stolen riches in his [[Lakitu's Cloud|cloud]], aptly named [[Fluffy]].

As Bowser begins organizing his troops, Lakitu spots Mario and Luigi spying on Bowser. Before Mario or Luigi can react, Lakitu begins trying to pelt them with [[Spiny Egg]]s. As Mario starts trying to flee from all of Lakitu's thrown Spiny Eggs, Luigi tries to battle Lakitu by jumping on a nearby cloud.

Before Lakitu can attack Luigi though, Luigi jumps on top of Fluffy, knocking Lakitu aside. Seeing that Princess Toadstool's crown is among Lakitu's stolen loot, Luigi grabs it, just as Lakitu grabs and puts on Luigi's hat. As Lakitu prepares to try and hit Mario with a Spiny Egg, Luigi convinces Lakitu to count all his treasure instead.

After a while of running, Mario, after stomping a [[Goomba]], makes his way to a [[Warp Pipe]], believing Luigi to be behind him. It is only when Mario reaches the Warp Pipe that he realizes Luigi is no longer with him.

Turning around, Mario is confronted by a hat wearing Bowser and his army. An angry Bowser begins to accuse Mario of stealing his crown, saying he better return it, or else.

Up above, Luigi is still sorting Lakitu's treasures as Lakitu, having somehow stolen Luigi's clothes, oversees him. Suddenly, Fluffy stops and Lakitu, after warning Luigi to not pull the escape hatch, which he almost accidentally did, asks Fluffy what's wrong. Fluffy replies that Bowser is nearby and says that he and Lakitu are supposed to report to him.

As Fluffy approaches Bowser, Luigi sees Mario and, thinking quickly, pulls open the escape hatch, dumping himself, Lakitu and all his stolen treasures down below. On the ground, Luigi finds Mario and, after digging him out of a pile of [[Koopabit]]s, travels back to Mushroom Land with Princess' Toadstool's crown while all nearby [[Shy Guy]]s and [[Koopa Troopa]]s begin taking all of Lakitu's Koopabits while Bowser, having been bonked on the head by a falling Lakitu, lies unconscious.

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-"'''Cloud Burst'''" is an issue of [[Valiant Comics|Valiant]]'s ''[[Nintendo Comics System]]'' imprint. Its title is a pun on "{{wp|cloudburst}}", an enormous amount of precipitation in a short period of time.
-==Plot synopsis==
+'''Cloud Burst''' is an issue of [[Valiant Comics|Valiant]]'s ''[[Nintendo Comics System]]'' imprint.
-In the throne room of [[Peach's Castle|the castle]], [[Mario]] and [[Luigi]] stumble upon [[Princess Peach|Princess Toadstool]] interrogating [[Wooster]] about the whereabouts of [[Peach's Crown|her crown]]. After learning that Wooster does not know where the crown is, Princess Toadstool begins to panic, if she does not have that crown in time for the "re-coronation" ceremony, she will not be able to be princess for an entire year; meaning [[Mushroom Kingdom|Mushroomland]] will be completely under the control of the idiotic [[Mushroom King|King Toadstool]], who has just stumbled into the room with his tie caught in a jar of peanut butter.
+==Plot Synopsis==
+In the throne room of [[Princess Peach's Castle|the castle]], [[Mario]] and [[Luigi]] stumble upon Princess Toadstool interrogating [[Wooster]] about the whereabouts of [[Princess Peach's Crown|her crown]]. After learning that Wooster doesn't know where the crown is, Princess Toadstool begins to panic, if she doesn't have that crown in time for the "re-coronation" ceremony, she won't be able to be princess for an entire year; meaning [[Mushroom Kingdom|Mushroom Land]] will be completely under the control of the idiotic [[Mushroom King|King Toadstool]], who has just stumbled into the room with his tie caught in a jar of peanut butter.
 As Wooster and Princess Toadstool begin helping King Toadstool get his tie loose from the jar of peanut butter, [[Toad]] suddenly rushes into the room, saying that [[Bowser]] has amassed an army in "World Three". Princess Toadstool suddenly sends Mario and Luigi out to battle Bowser and his army, thinking that Bowser was the one who stole her crown.
-In a large field, Bowser is in the process of telling his [[Lakitu]] minion that someone has been robbing him, stealing [[Koopabit]]s from him and even his crown has been taken. As Bowser tells Lakitu and the rest of his troops to be on the lookout for traitors, Lakitu snickers to himself and gazes at all the stolen riches in his [[Lakitu's Cloud|cloud]], aptly named [[Fluffy]].
+In a large field, Bowser is in the process of telling his [[Lakitu]] minion that someone's been robbing him, stealing [[Koopabit]]s from him and even his crown has been taken. As Bowser tells Lakitu and the rest of his troops to be on the look-out for traitors, Lakitu snickers to himself and gazes at all the stolen riches in his [[Lakitu's Cloud|cloud]], aptly named [[Fluffy]].
 As Bowser begins organizing his troops, Lakitu spots Mario and Luigi spying on Bowser. Before Mario or Luigi can react, Lakitu begins trying to pelt them with [[Spiny Egg]]s. As Mario starts trying to flee from all of Lakitu's thrown Spiny Eggs, Luigi tries to battle Lakitu by jumping on a nearby cloud.
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 After a while of running, Mario, after stomping a [[Goomba]], makes his way to a [[Warp Pipe]], believing Luigi to be behind him. It is only when Mario reaches the Warp Pipe that he realizes Luigi is no longer with him.
-Turning around, Mario is confronted by a hat wearing Bowser and his army. An angry Bowser begins to accuse Mario of stealing his crown, saying that he better return it.
+Turning around, Mario is confronted by a hat wearing Bowser and his army. An angry Bowser begins to accuse Mario of stealing his crown, saying he better return it, or else.
-Up above, Luigi is still sorting Lakitu's treasures as Lakitu, having somehow stolen Luigi's clothes, oversees him. Suddenly, Fluffy stops and Lakitu, after warning Luigi to not pull the escape hatch, which he almost accidentally did, asks Fluffy what is wrong. Fluffy replies that Bowser is nearby and says that he and Lakitu are supposed to report to him.
-As Fluffy approaches Bowser, Luigi sees Mario and, thinking quickly, pulls open the escape hatch, dumping himself, Lakitu, and all his stolen treasures down below. On the ground, Luigi finds Mario and, after digging him out of a pile of Koopabits, travels back to Mushroomland with Princess' Toadstool's crown while all nearby [[Shy Guy|Shyguy]]s and [[Koopa Troopa]]s begin taking all of Lakitu's Koopabits while Bowser, having been hit on the head by a falling Lakitu, lies unconscious.
-==Names in other languages==
+Up above, Luigi is still sorting Lakitu's treasures as Lakitu, having somehow stolen Luigi's clothes, oversees him. Suddenly, Fluffy stops and Lakitu, after warning Luigi to not pull the escape hatch, which he almost accidentally did, asks Fluffy what's wrong. Fluffy replies that Bowser is nearby and says that he and Lakitu are supposed to report to him.
-{{foreign names
-|Ger=Wolken-Bruch!
-|GerM=Cloud Burst!
-|GerC=<ref>[https://archive.org/details/SuperMarioBrosVideoComicMagazin/Super%20Mario%20Bros.%20Video-Comic-Magazin%2003%20%281991%29/page/n1/mode/2up Super Mario Bros. Video-Comic-Magazin]</ref>
-|Por=Caindo das nuvens
-|PorM=Falling from the clouds
-|PorC=<ref>[http://www.guiadosquadrinhos.com/edicao/super-mario-bros-n-1/su223100/54928 Super Mario Bros. n° 1]</ref>
-}}
-==References==
+As Fluffy approaches Bowser, Luigi sees Mario and, thinking quickly, pulls open the escape hatch, dumping himself, Lakitu and all his stolen treasures down below. On the ground, Luigi finds Mario and, after digging him out of a pile of [[Koopabit]]s, travels back to Mushroom Land with Princess' Toadstool's crown while all nearby [[Shy Guy]]s and [[Koopa Troopa]]s begin taking all of Lakitu's Koopabits while Bowser, having been bonked on the head by a falling Lakitu, lies unconscious.
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