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Honeyhive Galaxy

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1. Fawfulfury65 (talk) It has a rewrite template now...
2. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them!

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1. Bowser's luma (talk) Since Tucayo fixed the tense and such, it's now fine. Merci boucoup Tucayo (and I leave you speaking French to a Mexican...)
2. Tucayo (talk) - Oh yes, I need to vote here XP per BL. Sil vous plait. Wait...

Removal of Support/Oppose Votes

Fawfulfury65

1. Tucayo (talk) - Problems solved

BabyLuigiOnFire

1. Tucayo (talk) - Problems solved

Comments

Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

Wait, how come this article does not show up on this page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

65: There is no tense template. Instead, we have a blue one. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

I'll fix the demonstratives thing. Tucayo (talk)

It seems as if the verb tense template was changed to a different rewrite template, but still, that's against the rules. Bowser's luma (talk)

All problems have been solved. It was written terribly Tucayo (talk)