MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Bramble Scramble
Bramble Scramble
Support
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) This article is of good length, no redlinks, to my knowledge there are no errors, many images, everything needed for an FA.
- LeftyGreenMario (talk)
- Fawfulfury65 (talk)
Oppose
- Commander Code-8 (talk) As I have discovered in the comments, there a lots of tenses.
- KS3 (talk) per all.
Removal of Opposes
Commander Code-8
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Read the article, not the comments. I'm pretty sure I fixed them all.
KS3
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Per myself.
Comments
Just shorten the paragraphs a little bit. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Oh... this wasn't ready to become a FA... Fawfulfury65 (talk)
LeftyGreenMario:I was trying to find some grammar errors but I coudn't. Could you just point one out for me? Commander Code-8 (talk)
I don't know if there were any grammar errors either, but I'm sure there were tense errors. That was my fault, I wrote pretty much the whole article :p I don't have the ability to keep everything in present-tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
EDIT: I fixed all the errors I could find. I think the article is just about fine now, but I can't think of any way to shorten the paragraphs. I want the layout of the levels to be specific, so people know what obstacles and stuff are in the stage. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
There are a lot of future tenses in this article. It should be written in present tense. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Didn't I fix them? It should be in present tense now. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
It humored me that several users were trying to remove mine and KS3's votes, but there wasn't even a Removal heading. (I've added it in now) Commander Code-8 (talk)
- Someone deleted it by accident. But really, what's wrong with the article now? Fawfulfury65 (talk)
