User talk:128.201.218.57

Grammar

Hey, thank you for your edits! I noticed you were having some trouble, so here's some tips to work on:

• You aren't using proper punctuation, instead just letting the sentence run on or just not end. Instead of "When Luigi enters the Laboratories the normal mansion theme starts playing. If Luigi capture all ghosts in a room, the bonus mission music starts playing again", it should be: When Luigi enters the Laboratories, the normal mansion theme starts playing. If Luigi capture all the ghosts in a room, the bonus mission music starts playing again. The wording could be improved, but getting the punctuation right would be a big help. In this case, you forgot the commas and final period.
• "This is the only bonus mission to happen this." is not good grammar. "This is the only bonus mission where this occurs." works better.
• Make sure to double-check your spelling. If your browser has spellcheck, it'll let you know when it catches something with red lines under the words. For example, you had "Gradual Infiltration" as "Gradual Infitration", missing the L.
• Two of your edits conflicted with each other, this one on Metal Mario Cup and this one on Iggy Cup. They can't both be the longest time without a reappearance if they have two different time spans. I deleted the Metal Mario Cup one, but feel free to offer a clarification.

If you have something you're not quite figuring out, let me or another active member know, or view our help pages. Thank you and keep contributing. 17:30, August 24, 2021 (EDT)