Talk:Spooky (character)

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There are so many things wrong with the second paragraph that I think I might go mad.

  • Like many articles on this wiki, especially the Luigi's Mansion Portrait Ghosts, this article seems to be playing a game where you come up with as many excuses as possible to avoid using pronouns.
  • There's a dissonance in tenses.
  • There's a lot of unprofessional phrases, like "shut up", and "all that barking".

The Great Drathro 01:04, 20 July 2012 (EDT)

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