User talk:Xzelion/Story Archive

This where evryone can write reviews and comments, Thanks ahead of time for the reviews and commets.

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Reviews/Comments/Issue1

Awesome!-- Aipom -- awesome!

What's sorta ironic... I do watch the sunset and eat Vinilla Ice Cream, and I'm freinds with HK Max2 (talk)

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That story is supreme in every way I can think of!!!! The plot, dialogue and descriptions were amazing! The only thing that was confusing was that who was speaking was sometimes unclear (you probably forgot that in this Wiki, you have to press enter twice). There were some typos, but who cares aobut that anyway. Wow, and I'm one of the main characters, was it because I welcomed you? I hope SPL can overcome his fear to save me.... I rate it 50/10 :') (crying of joy because of the great story) ^{Plumber, darkgreen}

Great, great, great, great story.Plumber pretty much summed up the good and bad of your fanfic. Can I be in it? User:Gofer

Pure Gold. 5 Crystal Stars. *****<---Crystal Stars. Best portrayal of me yet.HK47, .

Reviews/Comments/Issue2

Even better, plus ME!-- Aipom --

Wow, you have succeeded in making it even better than before, something I thought was impossible. What does Isyou look like, anyway?^{Plumber, darkgreen}

I loved it, it has the BEST details. Isyou 19:02, 16 March 2007 (EDT)

Good,but I don't like it as much as chapter 1.The action part were a bit confusing. User:Gofer

Very nice, I like it. You gave me a nice role, too. --KPH2293 00:57, 17 March 2007 (EDT)