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Clockwork Ruins Galaxy

Support

  1. Gamefreak75 (talk) - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures.
  2. Edofenrir (talk)
  3. Fuzzipede27 (talk)
  4. MrConcreteDonkey (talk)
  5. Toadwell (talk)

Oppose

Removal of Opposes

Comments

My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)

Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. LeftyGreenMario (talk)