Talk:Pop Diva

History Section

The history section is currently pretty badly phrased and sounds pretty unprofessional; examples being "by having an item called Lyrics, written by Master Poet and have it to compose the item by Toad in the Desert as it changes into the item, the Melody; as the item helps Chanterelle reawaken her natural vocal ability" (which is a completely nonsense sentence), "Luckily, Mario manages to give Chanterelle the completed composition" (which is fairly unencyclopedic), and "She sings for Mario beautifully and in tune" (what even?). I don't have enough info to update it myself, but I would like to alert people who do that they should themselves. Furthermore, I would recommend considering adding the history section as-is to BJAODN. 73.147.234.34 18:32, 2 July 2017 (EDT)

Added {{rewrite}}. 18:36, 2 July 2017 (EDT)