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#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} It has a rewrite template now... | #{{User|Fawfulfury65}} It has a rewrite template now... | ||
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them! | #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them! | ||
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Revision as of 18:56, December 8, 2010
Honeyhive Galaxy
Remove Featured Article Status
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) It has a rewrite template now...
- BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them!
Keep Featured Article Status
- Bowser's luma (talk) Since Tucayo fixed the tense and such, it's now fine. Merci boucoup Tucayo (and I leave you speaking French to a Mexican...)
- Tucayo (talk) - Oh yes, I need to vote here XP per BL. Sil vous plait. Wait...
Removal of Support/Oppose Votes
Fawfulfury65
BabyLuigiOnFire
Comments
Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
Wait, how come this article does not show up on this page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
65: There is no tense template. Instead, we have a blue one. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
I'll fix the demonstratives thing. Tucayo (talk)
It seems as if the verb tense template was changed to a different rewrite template, but still, that's against the rules. Bowser's luma (talk)
All problems have been solved. It was written terribly Tucayo (talk)
