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I don't think this is up to the required standards. Jdrowlands (talk) 04:19, 16 August 2008 (EDT)

It is in desperate need of grammatical cleanup. — Stoo ben Roo ben 04:33, 16 August 2008 (EDT)

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			:It ''is'' in desperate need of grammatical cleanup. {{User:Stooben Rooben/sig}} 04:33, 16 August 2008 (EDT)