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#{{User|Toadette the Achiever}} Though the rest of the article is a masterpiece, there are two big problems which are glaringly obvious. The first one is especially obnoxious: the "[[Mario Super Sluggers#The "Challenge Mode Cutscenes"|Challenge Mode Cutscenes]]" section. That section is cluttered, with '''way''' too excessive detail{{footnote|main|1}} and littered flowery and/or otherwise unnecessary descriptions{{footnote|main|2}}. That aside, the second problem comes from the reception/sales section; rather, the lack thereof. Yeah. There is literally no critical reception section in the entire article. That being said, I think this article needs to be unfeatured for the problems mentioned. | #{{User|Toadette the Achiever}} Though the rest of the article is a masterpiece, there are two big problems which are glaringly obvious. The first one is especially obnoxious: the "[[Mario Super Sluggers#The "Challenge Mode Cutscenes"|Challenge Mode Cutscenes]]" section. That section is cluttered, with '''way''' too excessive detail{{footnote|main|1}} and littered flowery and/or otherwise unnecessary descriptions{{footnote|main|2}}. That aside, the second problem comes from the reception/sales section; rather, the lack thereof. Yeah. There is literally no critical reception section in the entire article. That being said, I think this article needs to be unfeatured for the problems mentioned. | ||
#{{User|Super Radio}} I'd say it's a little rough to base an entire unfeature nomination on a single section which, while badly written, can be easily fixed and in a short amount of time. But I'm too busy to do that now so per Toadette. | #{{User|Super Radio}} I'd say it's a little rough to base an entire unfeature nomination on a single section which, while badly written, can be easily fixed and in a short amount of time. But I'm too busy to do that now so per Toadette. | ||
#{{User|WeirdDave13}} Per all | |||
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Revision as of 23:59, December 2, 2018
Mario Super Sluggers
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- Toadette the Achiever (talk) Though the rest of the article is a masterpiece, there are two big problems which are glaringly obvious. The first one is especially obnoxious: the "Challenge Mode Cutscenes" section. That section is cluttered, with way too excessive detail1 and littered flowery and/or otherwise unnecessary descriptions2. That aside, the second problem comes from the reception/sales section; rather, the lack thereof. Yeah. There is literally no critical reception section in the entire article. That being said, I think this article needs to be unfeatured for the problems mentioned.
- Super Radio (talk) I'd say it's a little rough to base an entire unfeature nomination on a single section which, while badly written, can be easily fixed and in a short amount of time. But I'm too busy to do that now so per Toadette.
- WeirdDave13 (talk) Per all
Keep featured article status
Removal of support/oppose votes
Comments
1 - "After Daisy countered Mario's pitched ball, the scenery immediately changes as the ball is chased after by Toad in the Peach Ice Garden until he runs into a large Freezie and turns frozen solid upon collision. Fortunately, he is freed by a Blue Toad who accidentally crashes into the Freezie (with Toad revealing that he made the catch after being defrosted)."
2 - "But Bowser immediately drops in because his bat was stronger to alleviate the approaching threat. Bowser manages to counter the Bullet Bill with full force using his bat, resulting in the Bullet Bill going the other direction - now headed towards Wario and Waluigi - who are at this point running for dear life. The Bullet Bill destroys the cannon in the process and manages to snag both Wario and Waluigi, taking them straight up into the night sky. After hundreds of kilometers of flying, a huge fireworks explosion from that same Bullet Bill goes off. This was definitely not good news for Wario and Waluigi because of their being caught up in the extremely painful blast."
Just two examples, but the thing is, this is the whole section. 
(T|C) 19:33, 28 November 2018 (EST)
