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What's wrong with simple sentences? What if a whole article was written like this: Pinna Park at this point in time is an amusement park due to the fact that it has a ferris wheel in the middle of the park. At a later date all of a sudden, Bowser Jr. makes use of ElectroKoopas to take in possession of the the park due to the fact during that time there is no doubt but that Mario is going to take Bowser Jr. into defeat owing to the fact that Mario is in possession with E Gadd's new innovation, the FLUDD, until such time as Bowser Jr. made an escape. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | |||
Revision as of 19:58, May 7, 2010
Pinna Park
Support
- KS3 (talk) This is a great article with a minimal amount of errors and lots of pics.
- Mr bones (talk)
- Commander Code-8 (talk)
Oppose
- Bloc Partier (talk) -- The article has poor, immature writing. It's all simple sentences and simple word choice. Plus, the images all need captions.
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Comments
What's wrong with simple sentences? What if a whole article was written like this: Pinna Park at this point in time is an amusement park due to the fact that it has a ferris wheel in the middle of the park. At a later date all of a sudden, Bowser Jr. makes use of ElectroKoopas to take in possession of the the park due to the fact during that time there is no doubt but that Mario is going to take Bowser Jr. into defeat owing to the fact that Mario is in possession with E Gadd's new innovation, the FLUDD, until such time as Bowser Jr. made an escape. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
