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:Thanks for the compliments, guys, I really appreciate them! :D {{User:Stooben Rooben/sig}} 21:54, 17 January 2009 (EST) | :Thanks for the compliments, guys, I really appreciate them! :D {{User:Stooben Rooben/sig}} 21:54, 17 January 2009 (EST) | ||
This is a wonderful article. I have several questions/comments, and depending on the answers, minor changes to the article may be required. | |||
#In the background section, there is no mention of the power draining machine until it is used on Prince Mush. If I didn't know the story of the game, I would be very confused. It just appeared out of the blue in the article. It should be mentioned earlier in the article where this machine came from, or at least that it existed. | |||
#The article says that Grubba gave Mario a thirty coin gift for unknown reasons. I always thought it was a bonus for Mario reaching the Major Leagues (like a company bonus). Am I totally off-base or is there evidence to support my idea? | |||
#What does the "Double Attack?" column in the Powers and Abilities section mean? That should be explained in that short paragraph prior to the chart. | |||
#Could you explain the "slight arm movement" topic in the Physical Appearance section? I'm not sure what you are trying to get at... | |||
#And from the Trivia section...what's a "Grubber?" | |||
-- {{User|Son of Suns}} | |||
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Grubba
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- Stooben Rooben (talk) -- An extremely detailed article that contains a long biography on Grubba, as well as a "Powers and Abilities" section for when he transforms into Macho Grubba. The personality section describes how Grubba first appears as well as the side-effects of what his shallowness did to him. It also contains a fair amount of images, as well as good intro.
- Luigifreak (talk) Wow. This is a great article for being in just one game- a series of great articles too (articles like Gus.)
- Mario3v (talk) per all, this is a very good idea k.
- Bloc Partier (talk) - Once again, Stoobs does not fail to blow me away. Congrats for a great article!
- Super-Yoshi (talk) This article is just epic. Great job St00by!
- SolarBlaze (talk) Yes, I agree. This article is very well-written. Especially the personality part. You described Grubba's personality a lot better than I did. Nice job.
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- Thanks for the compliments, guys, I really appreciate them! :D — Stooben Rooben 21:54, 17 January 2009 (EST)
This is a wonderful article. I have several questions/comments, and depending on the answers, minor changes to the article may be required.
- In the background section, there is no mention of the power draining machine until it is used on Prince Mush. If I didn't know the story of the game, I would be very confused. It just appeared out of the blue in the article. It should be mentioned earlier in the article where this machine came from, or at least that it existed.
- The article says that Grubba gave Mario a thirty coin gift for unknown reasons. I always thought it was a bonus for Mario reaching the Major Leagues (like a company bonus). Am I totally off-base or is there evidence to support my idea?
- What does the "Double Attack?" column in the Powers and Abilities section mean? That should be explained in that short paragraph prior to the chart.
- Could you explain the "slight arm movement" topic in the Physical Appearance section? I'm not sure what you are trying to get at...
- And from the Trivia section...what's a "Grubber?"
-- Son of Suns (talk)
