MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Birdo

Birdo

Support

1. Birdo beauties (talk) Birdo's article does not seem to be incomplete, it should be a featured article! ^^
2. Goomba's Shoe15 (talk)
3. DKPetey99 (talk)

Oppose

1. Bowser Jr And Tom The Atum (talk) I found some minor mistakes in the article. Featured articles are usually perfect, not having even minor punctuation errors like I found in just the first section. If the first section has problems, then the rest of the article (which I didn't read) must not be so good.
2. Reversinator (talk) Half the sections are missing images. Also, there's some other errors, which I'll point out in the comments.

Removal of Support/Oppose Votes

Bowser Jr. And Tom The Atum

1. DKPetey99 (talk) Please state the problems, and I'm trying not to take offense when you said the history isn't good after I spent 30 mintues fixing it.

Comments

There doesnt seem to be any content missing Goomba's Shoe15 (talk)

Nor are there any improvement Tags i think it should be a featured article Goomba's Shoe15 (talk)

I agree! =D Birdo beauties (talk)

Is this article well-written? One of the latest featured articles, Shadow Mario did not pass the test of grammar and informal phrases when it first got nominated, and so I had to fix the mistakes. I'm just asking to see if anyone proofread the article already. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

Well i copied and pasted the article to Microsoft word and other than going crazy over the spelling of Mario characters there weren't any other problems Goomba's Shoe15 (talk)

You should know that spell-check will NOT catch words like bare instead of bear, three instead of tree, etc. And it will not catch nonstandard writing, redundancy, baggy words, nor tense either. It's best to read the article straight top all the way to the bottom carefully >_> BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

I wont catch any of that stuff either i come from a long line of people with terrible grammar Goomba's Shoe15 (talk)

That's alright. There are many other people out there (such as me for instance) who knows a thing or two about grammar and will be willing to do the dirty work out there because they can. I'll edit the page if there are no other editors at it already. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

If I only had a good grammar I'd be happy to do it. =) Birdo beauties (talk)

Missing images, too. I also see her on the cover of a Super Mario-Kun issue. History is incomplete, this cannot be featured DKPetey99 (talk)

There are no incomplete parts, they are just cameos. =) Birdo beauties (talk)

Just fix tense and add the Wario's Woods Super Mario-Kun issue, and I'll support. Actually, why not I'll fix the tense. DKPetey99 15:08, 2 June 2011 (EDT)

Oh, but I do not know anything about Super Mario Kun's issue u~u; could you do it it for me? Birdo beauties (talk) please ^^

Yes, but this still needs more work. I'm fixing it right now, but I see horrible mistakes such as "kill" instead of "defeat" and plenty of run-on sentences! DKPetey99 15:28, 2 June 2011 (EDT)

Hehe I apologize...that's my fault ^^; my native language is Spanish and I think I'm the one of the main contributors to this article. Birdo beauties (talk)