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===[[ | ===[[Clockwork Ruins Galaxy]]=== | ||
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#{{User|Gamefreak75}} - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures. | #{{User|Gamefreak75}} - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures. | ||
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My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense. {{User|Fawfulfury65}} | |||
:Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | |||
::I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | |||
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Clockwork Ruins Galaxy
This is an archive of a successful featured article nomination. If this page is unprotected, do not modify its contents, as it is an archive of past discussions.
Clockwork Ruins Galaxy was nominated to be a featured article at 22:50, 25 October 2010 (EDT) and passed at 12:05, 10 November 2010.
Support
- Gamefreak75 (talk) - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures.
- Edofenrir (talk)
- Fuzzipede27 (talk)
- MrConcreteDonkey (talk)
- Toadwell (talk)
- Baby Mario Bloops (talk)
- New Super Mario (talk)
Oppose
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Comments
My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
- Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
- I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
