Talk:Spooky (character): Difference between revisions
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* There's a lot of unprofessional phrases, like "shut up", and "all that barking". | * There's a lot of unprofessional phrases, like "shut up", and "all that barking". | ||
[[User:Drathro|The Great Drathro]] 01:04, 20 July 2012 (EDT) | [[User:Drathro|The Great Drathro]] 01:04, 20 July 2012 (EDT) | ||
:Instead of pointing them out on talk pages, maybe you should fix them. That's one of the reasons why we're here. {{user:Mario jc/sig}} | |||
Latest revision as of 19:50, February 28, 2014
There are so many things wrong with the second paragraph that I think I might go mad.
- Like many articles on this wiki, especially the Luigi's Mansion Portrait Ghosts, this article seems to be playing a game where you come up with as many excuses as possible to avoid using pronouns.
- There's a dissonance in tenses.
- There's a lot of unprofessional phrases, like "shut up", and "all that barking".
The Great Drathro 01:04, 20 July 2012 (EDT)
