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Revision as of 23:16, December 2, 2010

Honeyhive Galaxy

Honeyhive Galaxy, a featured article, was nominated to be unfeatured at 00:53 3 December 2010 (UTC). If the nomination does not pass by 00:53, 1 February 2011, it will be considered failed.

Remove Featured Article Status

  1. Bowser's luma (talk) It has the "wrong verb tense" template on it, and that is against the rules for a FA.
  2. Fawfulfury65 (talk) Has a tense template.
  3. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) Although I have indeed fixed all of the tense errors, the excessive use of demonstratives ("there are, there is") is a major problem. What it does is that bores the reader if used too much. Also, there are a bunch of capitalization errors (I'm not sure if mandibug is supposed to be lower-cased, and shouldn't the names of the planets also be lower-cased?) that I stumbled across and did my best to correct them, but there's still quite a notorious amount of them. Bottom line: proof-read articles before you feature them!
  4. LeftyGreenMario (talk) The writing just doesn't have the quality compared to other featured articles. Sometimes, we have to look how interesting the article is to read. This article has plenty of boring verbs. I know this isn't a narrative or something similar, but I believe phrases such as "there are" are too numerous in this article. I fixed up a bunch of errors, but I think the article still doesn't have that quality.

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Comments

Fawfulfury, you're supposed to add a reason for unfeature nominations. If this is a feature nomination, yeah, it's allowed. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

Wait, how come this article does not show up on this page under "FAs Proposed for Unfeaturing"? BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

65: There is no tense template. Instead, we have a blue one. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

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