MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Bramble Scramble

Bramble Scramble

Support

1. BluePikminKong497 (talk) This article is of good length, no redlinks, to my knowledge there are no errors, many images, everything needed for an FA.

Oppose

1. LeftyGreenMario (talk) Inconsistent tenses and other bad grammar ruin a perfectly fine article.
2. Commander Code-8 (talk) As I have discovered in the comments, their a lots of tenses.
3. KS3 (talk) per all.

Removal of Opposes

LeftyGreenMario

1. BluePikminKong497 (talk) It is in consistent tense now.

Commander Code-8

1. BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.

KS3

1. BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.

Comments

Just shorten the paragraphs a little bit. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

Oh... this wasn't ready to become a FA... Fawfulfury65 (talk)

LeftyGreenMario:I was trying to find some grammar errors but I coudn't. Could you just point one out for me? Commander Code-8 (talk)

I don't know if there were any grammar errors either, but I'm sure there were tense errors. That was my fault, I wrote pretty much the whole article :p I don't have the ability to keep everything in present-tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)

EDIT: I fixed all the errors I could find. I think the article is just about fine now, but I can't think of any way to shorten the paragraphs. I want the layout of the levels to be specific, so people know what obstacles and stuff are in the stage. Fawfulfury65 (talk)

There are a lot of future tenses in this article. It should be written in present tense. LeftyGreenMario (talk)

Didn't I fix them? It should be in present tense now. Fawfulfury65 (talk)