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Please avoid adding filler in your writing (making your writing too wordy) and changing valid words and phrases around unnecessarily (especially into a more casual tone). A lot of your edits, [[Special:Contributions/81.110.120.177|including]] [[Special:Contributions/94.5.199.60|your]] [[Special:Contributions/188.39.26.202|anonymous ones]], have consisted of this; for example, changing "fell through" to "declared impossible" (even though that's not what they explicitly said) and "too far in" into an unnecessarily more informal "incredibly deep in", and edits [[Special:Diff/3245627|here]] (the part about Chrom), [[Special:Diff/3224358|here]] (which could have been cut down without the first part), and [[Special:Diff/3252978|here]] ("fulfil the expectations and hopes of representing" is [[MarioWiki:Good writing#Epic, flowery, and grimdark writing|flowery writing]] and completely unnecessary; just say "represent"). Your rewriting of the ''Melee'' pre-release content page also removed formatting for game titles and you also forgot to italicise game titles yourself despite being [[User talk:81.110.120.177|reminded already]]. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 07:58, August 29, 2021 (EDT) | Please avoid adding filler in your writing (making your writing too wordy) and changing valid words and phrases around unnecessarily (especially into a more casual tone). A lot of your edits, [[Special:Contributions/81.110.120.177|including]] [[Special:Contributions/94.5.199.60|your]] [[Special:Contributions/188.39.26.202|anonymous ones]], have consisted of this; for example, changing "fell through" to "declared impossible" (even though that's not what they explicitly said) and "too far in" into an unnecessarily more informal "incredibly deep in", and edits [[Special:Diff/3245627|here]] (the part about Chrom), [[Special:Diff/3224358|here]] (which could have been cut down without the first part), and [[Special:Diff/3252978|here]] ("fulfil the expectations and hopes of representing" is [[MarioWiki:Good writing#Epic, flowery, and grimdark writing|flowery writing]] and completely unnecessary; just say "represent"). Your rewriting of the ''Melee'' pre-release content page also removed formatting for game titles and you also forgot to italicise game titles yourself despite being [[User talk:81.110.120.177|reminded already]]. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 07:58, August 29, 2021 (EDT) | ||
Sorry, I will not do it again. | |||
[[User:ItsMarioTime!|ItsMarioTime!]] ([[User talk:ItsMarioTime!|talk]]) 02:11, August 31, 2021 (EDT) | |||
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Please avoid adding filler in your writing (making your writing too wordy) and changing valid words and phrases around unnecessarily (especially into a more casual tone). A lot of your edits, including your anonymous ones, have consisted of this; for example, changing "fell through" to "declared impossible" (even though that's not what they explicitly said) and "too far in" into an unnecessarily more informal "incredibly deep in", and edits here (the part about Chrom), here (which could have been cut down without the first part), and here ("fulfil the expectations and hopes of representing" is flowery writing and completely unnecessary; just say "represent"). Your rewriting of the Melee pre-release content page also removed formatting for game titles and you also forgot to italicise game titles yourself despite being reminded already. 
Mario JC 07:58, August 29, 2021 (EDT)
Sorry, I will not do it again. ItsMarioTime! (talk) 02:11, August 31, 2021 (EDT)
