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#{{User|Time Turner}} There's quite a bit of problems with the tense, and it reads more like a walkthrough than an actual article. The parts that describe the camera's movements also seem rather odd. | |||
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Revision as of 22:59, June 27, 2013
Bianco Hills
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- SKmarioman (talk) Well written and organized, contains multiple high quality images, each individual mission is accurately described and each Blue Coin and even fruit locations are stated. On a side note it is also used as the example article for the Star and Shine Missions Collaboration.
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- Time Turner (talk) There's quite a bit of problems with the tense, and it reads more like a walkthrough than an actual article. The parts that describe the camera's movements also seem rather odd.
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I have one problem: the future tense is used a lot in this article. It needs to be changed to past tense. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
- D'oh, I meant present tense. >.< LeftyGreenMario (talk)
