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I removed some of the bad writing, but I don't think I got it all {{User|Yoshi876}}

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Smithy

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  1. LeftyGreenMario (talk) To put it bluntly, the writing is abominable. Read the opening paragraph. "Smithy creates mechanical monsters to be unleashed against the peaceful people of other worlds." It doesn't stop there. This type of writing is everywhere in this article. "Smithy calmly asks Mario to turn over his Star Pieces, and when Mario refuses, an epic battle commences." I'll let these few examples speak for themselves. But, our wiki does not allow this type of writing, especially in a featured article.
  2. GreenDisaster (talk) Ah, the relics of the past, chock full of writing that's more at home in a Shakespeare play then in a wiki. Per LGM.

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I removed some of the bad writing, but I don't think I got it all Yoshi876 (talk)