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| I missed some parts, and now I've read them they're awesome. (I didn't know what issue to comment on, so I left it here, if that's fine.) {{User:Smiddle/sig}} 15:26, 6 May 2007 (EDT)
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| Can I be in this? I've read it, and it's awesome. I don't know why I didn't read it sooner.{{User:Purple Yoshi/sig}}
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| Wait a second...*giggles* I was in it without even knowing! Thanks so much{{User:Purple Yoshi/sig}}
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| Pure Gold. 5 Crystal Stars. *****<---Crystal Stars. Best portrayal of me yet.[[User:HK-47|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Black;">H</span>]][[User talk:HK-47|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Red;">K</span>]][[Special: Recent Changes|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Black;">4</span>]][[User:HK-47/sig|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Red;">7</span>]], [[Special:Random|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Purple;">{{{1|.}}}</span>]] | | Pure Gold. 5 Crystal Stars. *****<---Crystal Stars. Best portrayal of me yet.[[User:HK-47|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Black;">H</span>]][[User talk:HK-47|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Red;">K</span>]][[Special: Recent Changes|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Black;">4</span>]][[User:HK-47/sig|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Red;">7</span>]], [[Special:Random|<span style="font-Family:font; color:Purple;">{{{1|.}}}</span>]] |
| :Very nice, I love it. --{{User:Yoshi626/sig}} 00:57, 17 March 2007 (EDT)
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| Wow, you have succeeded in making it even better than before, something I thought was impossible. What does Isyou look like, anyway?{{User:Plumber/sig|And I come back!}} | | Wow, you have succeeded in making it even better than before, something I thought was impossible. What does Isyou look like, anyway?{{User:Plumber/sig|And I come back!}} |
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| I loved it, it has the BEST details. [[User:Isyou|Isyou]] 19:02, 16 March 2007 (EDT)
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| Good,but I don't like it as
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| much as chapter 1.The action part were a bit confusing.
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| :To repeat what I said in the Issue 1 section: Very nice, I love it. You gave me a nice role, too. Can't wait for the next issue! --{{User:Yoshi626/sig}} 00:57, 17 March 2007 (EDT)
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| ::DUDE, U R TEH AWESOMENESS. THAT PWNED. All it needs is ME! :P Nah, not really. Still, sweet in all ways I can think of. Try to improve grammer, though. {{User:3dejong/sig|make me drink MOUNTAIN DEW!}}
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| Awesome! 1 thing wrong: I'm a total Chicken (bawwk bawwkkk!) {{User:maxlover2/sig|still good. 9/10}}
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| I liked it! I hope you make more! {{User:isyou/sig}}
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| Wow... it keeps getting better and better. You rock! {{User:Plumber/sig|Thanks for devoting you talk page to me and saying I should be a sysop.}}
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| Great,Great,GREAT!The portrayal of the alien is not very Metalslug'ish,but oh well.Still awesome.
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| :And I'm in it, too! Yay! I'm a cool army-type guy! Anyway, the stories are great. You've sure got some writin' skillz... --[[User:YellowYoshi398|YellowYoshi398]] 08:14, 23 March 2007 (EDT)
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| I loved it! You have a real tallant! {{User:isyou/sig}}
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| Pure brillance, but I have a little reserve against my character dialogue, when Plumber landed Mario97 hat to Gofer, he should have said something among the line of 'Who name their son 'Mario97'? I bet he was an idiot, anyway.'Just my two cent.
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| You have a real talent for writing. That was great! {{User:Plumber/sig|Untendo is at Wikia with UnMarioWiki now.}}
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| ==Reviews/Comments/Issue5==
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| That was the best one ever! I can see how Mario97 is turning into a Captain Olimar-type guy. And Wayoshi pwned. {{User:Plumber/sig}}
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| :I admit I'm impressed by this in total. Nice work. {{User:Wayoshi/sig}} 20:09, 7 April 2007 (EDT)
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| Woohoo! Wow! Amazing! Wait, the three man mission didn't happen yet, right? Unless it's Ultimatetoadette, Arend and Fg. Great cliffhanger at the end too. {{User:Plumber/sig|Max, that pan left a bump!}}
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| Cool, but a bit short, and I'm not in it.
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| A-MA-ZING!You made my character a big a****** like I wanted him to be!The only thing I did'nt like is that I am a prince, I thought something in the line of 'Supreme Commander of the invasion force'.The chapter could have been a bit longer, and it could definitely used some humor.Keep up the good work!
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| They keep getting better, and better, and better, and better.... {{User:Plumber/sig|...and better....}}
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| Hhhhmmmm... Much shorter than I expected (unless it's just the first part), still, epic as ever! But, who are the "Odam"? Are these guy a made-up faction or what? It is just me, or your grammar and spelling skill have improved?
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| [[User:Gofer|Where are the Bacterions?]]
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| Amamamamazing! And the result of the poll is cool. {{User:Plumber/sig}}
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| ==Reviews/Comments/Issue9==
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| LOL, Bean was thought to be a sysop! And the plot keeps getting better and better... {{User:Plumber/sig|When will the next one be out?}}
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| Good, I've noticed less spelling and gramatical mistakes. I think you could add more description (what does that earthpound thing look like?). I like the way you handled the appearance of the Bacterion's Empire, instead of throwing it all in one chapter, you take it slow and soft... I like that.
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| Nice job, suspenseful. Makes me want more. Again, five crystal stars. *****<----Crystal Stars.{{User:HK-47/sig}}
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| Sounds cool. You should be a VG creator with your vast amounts of creativity.{{User:Knife/sig}} 15:30, 7 June 2007 (EDT)
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| Kewl, but I thought SM97 was supposed to die without his suit.
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| [[User:Gofer|That portrayal of Smiddle was hilarious.]]
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| BEST...ONE....YET.....EVER........22:51, 8 June 2007 (EDT)
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