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You are still using a lot of flowery expressions and terms in much of your edits. Keep your language as neutral as possible and just describe what is happening exactly without adding "twists" to or looking too much into them. Don't use captions/descriptions like "The rivalry between Mario and Wario is renewed" or "[character] is ready for action/hits the turf" (or [[Special:Diff/3881102|this]], when it's just a picture of Mario and Peach standing), but just say something like "Mario and Wario compete against each other" or "[character] prepares to play/arrives on the field". {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 19:36, April 2, 2023 (EDT) | You are still using a lot of flowery expressions and terms in much of your edits. Keep your language as neutral as possible and just describe what is happening exactly without adding "twists" to or looking too much into them. Don't use captions/descriptions like "The rivalry between Mario and Wario is renewed" or "[character] is ready for action/hits the turf" (or [[Special:Diff/3881102|this]], when it's just a picture of Mario and Peach standing), but just say something like "Mario and Wario compete against each other" or "[character] prepares to play/arrives on the field". {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 19:36, April 2, 2023 (EDT) | ||
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