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| Hi, please don't make pointless edits that have nothing to do with the article, like you did [[Special:Diff/2611209|here]]. Also, don't use the word "you" in article prose, as all articles on every wiki (including this one) must be written from a third-person perspective. Thanks! {{User:Toadette the Achiever/sig}} 10:42, 26 February 2019 (EST) | | Hi, please don't make pointless edits that have nothing to do with the article, like you did [[Special:Diff/2611209|here]]. Also, don't use the word "you" in article prose, as all articles on every wiki (including this one) must be written from a third-person perspective. Thanks! {{User:Toadette the Achiever/sig}} 10:42, 26 February 2019 (EST) |
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| Please don't add obvious information like you did [[Special:Diff/2611212|here]]. It doesn't need to be stated that Castle Wall isn't literally a castle wall; just an image of the course suffices. Keep this up, and a warning will be issued. {{User:Toadette the Achiever/sig}} 10:51, 26 February 2019 (EST)
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| Please don't leave informal, comment-like "information" (or straight-up comments) on articles. Keep in mind that this is an encyclopedia, so your information should be written in a formal, informative, and professional style, not in a way that sounds like you're having a casual conversation to the reader. This includes the use of the word "you" (as you've already been told); we write in third-person, so you should use "the player" or the character's name instead. I would suggest giving [[MarioWiki:Good writing]] a read.
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| In addition, what you added on the [[Roto-disc]] page falls under [[MarioWiki:Good writing#Everything but the kitchen sink]]; it's possible to recreate a lot of elements that are remotely similar to an enemy/obstacle from the ''Mario'' franchise, so unless you have anything to add specifically about the Roto-disc, this isn't needed. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 23:42, March 21, 2019 (EDT)
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