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| :This applies to the start of sentences, section headers, and proper names. Also, avoid using "you", instead using a character name or "the player". {{User:Alex95/sig}} 18:13, 27 February 2019 (EST) | | :This applies to the start of sentences, section headers, and proper names. Also, avoid using "you", instead using a character name or "the player". {{User:Alex95/sig}} 18:13, 27 February 2019 (EST) |
| ::Also, please remember to not use contractions in things that are not things such as quotes, so for example "can't" should be "cannot". {{User:Doomhiker/sig}} 18:15, 27 February 2019 (EST) | | ::Also, please remember to not use contractions in things that are not things such as quotes, so for example "can't" should be "cannot". {{User:Doomhiker/sig}} 18:15, 27 February 2019 (EST) |
| :::Also, character names should be capitalized along with the first word of each sentence. [[User:TheDarkStar|TheDarkStar]] ([[User talk:TheDarkStar|talk]]) 17:57, March 25, 2019 (EDT)
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| == Grammar ==
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| Try to take better care in your grammar when editing. Looking at [[Special:Diff/2612012|this edit]] as an example, the sentence you added at the end here: "''Luigi has to enter the Terrace at the start of the mission to see [[King Boo]] open the [[paranormal portal]], then defeat a huge horde of ghosts here at the end to save his dimension from collapsing''', the portal is seen but cannot be entered.'''''" is grammatically incorrect, as this forms a {{wp|run-on sentence}}. In cases like this, you need to start a new sentence or use a semicolon or conjunction, not join it with the previous sentence using a comma.
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| <blockquote>''Luigi has to enter the Terrace at the start of the mission to see [[King Boo]] open the [[paranormal portal]], then defeat a huge horde of ghosts here at the end to save his dimension from collapsing'''. T'''he portal is seen but cannot be entered.</blockquote>
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| Also, when naming titles like, please remember to ''italicise'' them so it's formatted ''[[Luigi's Mansion 3]]'' (<code><nowiki>''[[Luigi's Mansion 3]]''</nowiki></code>), not [[Luigi's Mansion 3]] (<code><nowiki>[[Luigi's Mansion 3]]</nowiki></code>) (see [[MarioWiki:Manual of Style#Italicizing titles]], though I recommend giving the whole page a read). Thanks and keep contributing. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 22:14, 27 February 2019 (EST)
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| Additionally, try to avoid incorporating subjectivity and informal language in your edits, such as words like "strangely" and "somehow". They should be kept professional and in an encyclopedic tone. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 23:22, 27 February 2019 (EST)
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| Hello, please note that small numbers should be fully spelt so for example four should be spelt as four, not 4. Thanks! {{User:Doomhiker/sig}} 17:23, 28 February 2019 (EST)
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| Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages with 4 tildes. A tilde looks like this ~. [[User:TheDarkStar|TheDarkStar]] ([[User talk:TheDarkStar|talk]]) 17:43, 1 March 2019 (EST)
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| i can do whatever i want, and besides i'm new, so cut me some slack. [[Pizza loving 1]]
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| :That's not how that works. And it's because you're new that someone is trying to help you. {{User:Alex95/sig}} 17:49, 1 March 2019 (EST)
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| == TheLukesterJoy ==
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| Your other account {{user|TheLukesterJoy}} has been blocked. Keep in mind that creating multiple accounts is prohibited; each user is only allowed one account when editing, even through multiple devices. Please review your talk page as well regarding grammar and writing. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 21:49, August 15, 2019 (EDT)
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