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| Hello there, Luigi-me! I noticed you sent your application into our Gmail account a second time. I just wanted to let you into we're reviewing your initial application still and you should expect to hear back from us on that tomorrow. We'll be sure to provide as much feedback as possible for you to improve your section, in any case. Thanks for your patience. [[User:Hooded Pitohui|Hooded Pitohui]] ([[User talk:Hooded Pitohui|talk]]) 22:56, June 10, 2021 (EDT) | | Hello there, Luigi-me! I noticed you sent your application into our Gmail account a second time. I just wanted to let you into we're reviewing your initial application still and you should expect to hear back from us on that tomorrow. We'll be sure to provide as much feedback as possible for you to improve your section, in any case. Thanks for your patience. [[User:Hooded Pitohui|Hooded Pitohui]] ([[User talk:Hooded Pitohui|talk]]) 22:56, June 10, 2021 (EDT) |
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| :Hello again, Luigi-me. I'm here to let you know that we've finished reviewing your application for ''Opinion Pipe''. Unfortunately, we've decided at this time to '''reject''' your section. While we enjoyed your addition of a picture to the section, the biggest obstacle that kept us from accepting your section was its lack of focus. As it is currently written, the section feels like a simple listing of facts about Luigi. It doesn't have enough substance to be a Critic Corner review, and it doesn't have enough of a hook to it to be a Fake News section. What we recommend is that you think a little more about which direction you would like to take the section. If you would like it to be a Critic Corner section, state your opinion more clearly, and expand on the reasons you think Luigi is a better character. Answer questions like ''why'' Luigi being strong and loving make him a better character than Mario. If you would like this to be a Fake News section, consider giving the section a stronger hook by finding some way to frame it. Maybe it can be a character in-universe talking about Luigi, perhaps a fan he has. Maybe it could be an excerpt from a biography or a news program.
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| :Sorry that this couldn't work out this time, but please don't be discouraged. If you take our feedback, you can send in a new application and try again! If you have any questions, or need clarification on our feedback or assistance, please reach out. We'd be happy to help you. Thanks for your interest in ''The 'Shroom''! [[User:Hooded Pitohui|Hooded Pitohui]] ([[User talk:Hooded Pitohui|talk]]) 23:31, June 11, 2021 (EDT)
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