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Please pay closer attention to the sentences when making grammar fixes. While some of those fixes were right, a number of them were incorrect (see [[Special:Diff/3032044|this]] and [[Special:Diff/3050650|this]]). | Please pay closer attention to the sentences when making grammar fixes. While some of those fixes were right, a number of them were incorrect (see [[Special:Diff/3032044|this]] and [[Special:Diff/3050650|this]]). | ||
For example, [[Special:Diff/3032037| | For example, [[Special:Diff/3032037|Your ''Super Mario Bros.'' edit]] | ||
*If you read the paragraph, "In other worlds" is correct in the context (''"In worlds 3-1 and A-3, there are warp zones placed beyond the goals. In other worlds..."''); it's not a typo of "In other words". | *If you read the paragraph, "In other worlds" is correct in the context (''"In worlds 3-1 and A-3, there are warp zones placed beyond the goals. In other worlds..."''); it's not a typo of "In other words". | ||
*"A close-up of Mario from ''Super Mario Bros.'' as well as a picture from said game '''are''' unlockable backgrounds", not "is" since there are two subjects (the close-up and the picture). | *"A close-up of Mario from ''Super Mario Bros.'' as well as a picture from said game '''are''' unlockable backgrounds", not "is" since there are two subjects (the close-up and the picture). |