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|A-rating=4 | |||
|A-comment=This section has been fixed from the last time I reviewed it. | |||
|D-rating=3.0 | |||
|D-comment=The article has been expanded enough to increase by .5. However, there are still a few more problems, like minor game limits are not explained (the most possible damage a character can get is 999%, the player can set 1-99 lives, how much time can a player set in how many increments, or no more than 999 Coins can be collected). There is nothing that mentions that the player can gain points in Single-Player Mode or that there are records recorded in Mission Mode. I think room can be made on the missions template to tell whether the record is measured by time or KOs. Tournament Mode needs to be expanded a little more regarding pre-tourney options. I have also forgotten one of the most important things: Critic Reception by gameranking sources. More to be explained after these are solved. | |||
|G-rating=3.5 | |||
|G-comment=There are still a few one liners, but I see that the majority of them are placed right under a section following many sub-sections. Instead of just pointing out the obvious, you should remove those sentences and let the sub-sections explain. | |||
|I-rating=3.5 | |||
|I-comment=I must say that this hasn't been worked on much since I last reviewed (N/O). There should be more screenshots unique to the article and one of the images are still a bit small. It needs more images on the lower half of the article though. | |||
|F-rating=3.5 | |||
|F-comment=Maybe another table for the courses/stages in classic and adventure mode. The Event Mode table looks a bit weird, though I'm not sure if that is intentional or not. | |||
|FR-comment=This article is more improved from the last time and a little more might make it good enough to be nominated. | |||
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{{PAIRreview | |||
|A-rating=4 | |||
|A-comment=The different controls and modes are explained well and accurately. Very good quality without seeming overwhelming. | |||
|D-rating=3.5 | |||
|D-comment=The General Moves section could be expanded, maybe adding some advanced tricks in addition to the basics. Some of the characters have long descriptions, while others just have one or two sentences. They should be even one way or the other. A few of the single-player modes could be expanded. A little more could go in the way of the Critical Reception sub-header, as I know there's a lot more the critics have said about the game. | |||
|G-rating=2.5 | |||
|G-comment=Minor grammar mistakes, but they happen all over the article, particularly in the single player modes. | |||
|I-rating=3.5 | |||
|I-comment=Great on the various pictures in the tables, but perhaps some screenshots of actual gameplay would work well here. | |||
|F-rating=3.5 | |||
|F-comment=Good balancing of text and images in the first quarter of the article. Maybe implement a show/hide feature on the tables to make it seem less overwhelming. Event Match table looks a bit odd. | |||
|FR-comment=Good article, just needs a bit of tweaking of grammar and expanding on some sections. | |||
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==Unlocking== | ==Unlocking== | ||
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==Sonic/Tails Hoax== | ==Sonic/Tails Hoax== | ||
Hey,<br/> | Hey,<br/> | ||
do you think that the 2002 April Fools joke that Sonic and Tails were unlockable characters (for SSBM) should be mentioned in the trivia of this article? '''[[ | do you think that the 2002 April Fools joke that Sonic and Tails were unlockable characters (for SSBM) should be mentioned in the trivia of this article? '''[[McAusten]]!''' '''·''' [[User talk:McAusten|talk to me]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/McAusten|my edits]] 17:59, 13 December 2011 (EST) | ||
:No, it's not really important. {{User:Nintendo64Fan/sig}} | :No, it's not really important. {{User:Nintendo64Fan/sig}} | ||
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...So what was the point of this comment? {{user:Mario jc/sig}} | ...So what was the point of this comment? {{user:Mario jc/sig}} | ||