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==A little Pointer==
==A little Pointer==
I think this article should focus less on how to defeat that thing, but more on <u>explaining why Peach's Castle has developed a life of it's own</u>, and further <u>how this is involved in the plot</u>. That would be the first question that visitors would ask, if they haven't played the game. - {{User:Edofenrir/sig}} 10:56, 14 October 2009 (EDT)
I think this article should focus less on how to defeat that thing, but more on <u>explaining why Peach's Castle has developed a life of it's own</u>, and further <u>how this is involved in the plot</u>. That would be the first question that visitors would ask, if they haven't played the game. - {{User:Edofenrir/sig}} 10:56, 14 October 2009 (EDT)
I Personally don`t think Super Peach Castle has a life of ita own but i think it is a robot which [[Dark Fawful]] Controls. How it is involved in the plot? i don`t know.[[User:MarioMaster720]] 09.11.2009
:The point is: This article should provide someone who hasn't played the game with enough information to comprehend the circumstances of the battle, and what lead to it. Currently the article says something like: "In BiS, there's some giant castle or something and for no apparent reason Bowser has to fight it. Here is how you do it." That's far too vague. The term "to develop a life of its own" is just a figure of speech, and a way to say "The castle just transformed into a giant robot". And last, everything that is not optional is somehow involved in the plot, or else there's no reason to fight it in the first place. - {{User:Edofenrir/sig}} 19:13, 9 November 2009 (EST)
Okay, i get your drift [[User:MarioMaster720]]
== Done!!! ==
There, I edited the article to focus more on the Plot. [[User:MarioMaster720]] 22.12.2009
==Stats==
Ok how is that the thing has ''stats'' when its a Giant Bowser battle?
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