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== Eat Himself ==
== Eat Himself ==


Actually (it says in the Luigi's Mansion bios) that he ate himself alive. [[Image:MayorPenguinPM.png]]<span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User:Paper Jorge|P]]'''[[User talk:Paper Jorge|aper]] '''[[User:Paper Jorge/sig|Jorge]]'''</font></span>
Actually (it says in the Luigi's Mansion bios) that he ate himself alive. [[Image:Mayor.gif]]<span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User:Paper Jorge|P]]'''[[User talk:Paper Jorge|aper]] '''[[User:Paper Jorge/sig|Jorge]]'''</font></span>


:What's the exact quote? I thought it said he "ate himself to death", but I could be mistaken. -- [[User: Son of Suns|Son of Suns]]
:What's the exact quote? I thought it said he "ate himself to death", but I could be mistaken. -- [[User: Son of Suns|Son of Suns]]
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::I guess that makes sense. -- [[User: Son of Suns|Son of Suns]]
::I guess that makes sense. -- [[User: Son of Suns|Son of Suns]]
== Revise the opening ==
The second paragraph is mostly made up of fluff and appears to be made to look like a story.
First, this shouldn't be written like some unprofessional story. Second, "the green clad ghost hunter"? I think "he" is enough. Does someone hate pronouns that much? [[User:Drathro|The Great Drathro]] 01:01, 20 July 2012 (EDT)

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