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==Grammar Check Please== | ==Grammar Check Please== | ||
Could a native speaker of English please check the article for grammatical errors? It's nominated for FA, but it should be checked before. Thanks! {{User:Time Q/sig}} 13:38, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | Could a native speaker of English please check the article for grammatical errors? It's nominated for FA, but it should be checked before. Thanks! {{User:Time Q/sig}} 13:38, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | ||
:I can. <span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User talk:Yoshario|Y]]'''oshario'''</font></span>[[ | :I can. <span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User talk:Yoshario|Y]]'''oshario'''</font></span>[[Image:Yoshi_wearing_mario's hat.jpg|30px]] | ||
::Cool. Thanks! {{User:Time Q/sig}} 13:52, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | ::Cool. Thanks! {{User:Time Q/sig}} 13:52, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | ||
:::No problem. I finished checking the grammar. There were a few grammatical/spelling errors, but I fixed them. <span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User talk:Yoshario|Y]]'''oshario'''</font></span>[[ | :::No problem. I finished checking the grammar. There were a few grammatical/spelling errors, but I fixed them. <span style="font-family:verdana; color:#red;"><font size="5">'''[[User talk:Yoshario|Y]]'''oshario'''</font></span>[[Image:Yoshi_wearing_mario's hat.jpg|30px]] | ||
::::Thanks again. However, some wordings still seem strange to me, like for example the very first sentence: "A Kart is a vehicle used in the Mario Kart series, which they <small>'''''(?)'''''</small> can come in various sizes and colors, generally regarding to <small>'''''(is an article missing here?)'''''</small> certain character's color." I'm not sure though if those are actually mistakes, just wanting to make sure we don't put a flawed article on the main page. {{User:Time Q/sig}} 16:34, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | ::::Thanks again. However, some wordings still seem strange to me, like for example the very first sentence: "A Kart is a vehicle used in the Mario Kart series, which they <small>'''''(?)'''''</small> can come in various sizes and colors, generally regarding to <small>'''''(is an article missing here?)'''''</small> certain character's color." I'm not sure though if those are actually mistakes, just wanting to make sure we don't put a flawed article on the main page. {{User:Time Q/sig}} 16:34, 26 August 2009 (EDT) | ||