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{{UNFANOMFAIL|nominated=00:00, 13 May 2010 (GMT)|lastedit=2010-08-23 14:41:59}}
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==== Remove Featured Article Status ====
==== Remove Featured Article Status ====
#{{User|Raphaelraven497}} THough it looks as if it is long, it IS in need of minor expansion. Some grammar errors. A few pictures, in JAPANESE?!?!? This ia an ENGLISH wiki. Just not good enough.
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} It doesn't quite matter if some of the pictures are in Japanese, but almost all of the images are horribly low quality. I also found some areas that were in present tense, and others that were in past tense. They should all be in either past or present, not both.
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} It doesn't quite matter if some of the pictures are in Japanese, but almost all of the images are horribly low quality. I also found some areas that were in present tense, and others that were in past tense. They should all be in either past or present, not both.
#{{User|Booderdash}} It is WAY too long; some of the sections, they can definitly be indented, plus many of the information is overly redundant (such as Beldam mistreating Vivian which is said over and over again), the redemption section is much too short compared to the other sections, and I think the Moves section of her template needs to split the first battle and the second.
#{{user|KS3}} Per all.
#{{User|Marioguy1}} - I added a {{fake link|tense}} tag to the article in the TTYD section, if that tag is removed (validly), remove my vote along with it.


==== Keep Featured Article Status ====
==== Keep Featured Article Status ====
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#{{User|Mario is awesome!!!}} There is nothing wrong with this article, so why should it become unfeatured?
#{{User|Mario is awesome!!!}} There is nothing wrong with this article, so why should it become unfeatured?
#{{User|Chickasaurus}} Per SolarBlaze.
#{{User|Chickasaurus}} Per SolarBlaze.
#{{User|Kirbythestar}} The grammar errors mentioned I could not find (perhaps they were removed) and the low-quality images have presumably been fixed by SolarBlaze. Don't unfeature this article.
#{{User|Kirbythestar}} The grammar errors mentioned I could not find (perhaps they were removed) and the images have presumably been fixed by SolarBlaze. Don't unfeature it.
#{{User|Fuzzipede27}} Per SolarBlaze


==== Removal of Support/Oppose Votes ====
==== Removal of Support/Oppose Votes ====
'''SolarBlaze'''
'''SolarBlaze'''
#{{User|Time Q}}: Saying that the low-quality pictures "could easily be replaced" is not a valid reason. Before this isn't actually done, the article is not FA-worthy. No one knows ''if'' the pictures will actually be replaced.
#{{User|Time Q}}: Saying that the low-quality pictures "could easily be replaced" is not a valid reason. Before this isn't actually done, the article is not FA-worthy. No one knows ''if'' the pictures will actually be replaced.
#{{User|Booderdash}} Per Time Q
#{{user|KS3}} They were replaced, but they still are low quality, with some logos too.


==== Comments ====
==== Comments ====
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Uh... in the trivia section there's this random stat table for Beldam. It seems misplaced. Where is it supposed to go? {{User|Fawfulfury65}}
Uh... in the trivia section there's this random stat table for Beldam. It seems misplaced. Where is it supposed to go? {{User|Fawfulfury65}}


At the time I was expanding this article about a year ago, I tried to put that alongside the "Data and Statistics" section, but somehow, it ended up around the triva section. I'm not quite sure how to fix that, and I've been at a lost as to what to do with it for a while. Should I just replace the other table at the top of the article with that one? {{User|SolarBlaze}}
At the time I was expanding this article about a year ago, I tried to put that alongside the "Data and Statistics" section, but somehow, it ended up around the triva section. I'm not quite sure how to fix that, and I've been at a lost as to what to do with it for a while. Should I just replace the other table at the top of the article with that one?


As for another minor update, I've corrected the "past/present-tense" grammar errors, as well as replacing the two images that originally had IGN logos at the bottom. As for the other images, I haven't been able to find any higher quality versions of them yet. However, aside from the image where Beldam's calling Vivian a "useless little fool", you've got to admit that the others are a major improvement over the ones that were originally there. Here are some comparisons:
As for another minor update, I've corrected the "past/present-tense" grammar errors, as well as replacing the two images that originally had IGN logos at the bottom. As for the other images, I haven't been able to find any higher quality versions of them yet. However, aside from the image where Beldam's calling Vivian a "useless little fool", you've got to admit that the others are a major improvement over the ones that were originally there. Here are some comparisons:

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