Editing MarioWiki:Featured articles/N2/Super Mario Galaxy

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===Support===
#{{User|PeachRosalinaLeia}} I carefully read through the entire article and corrected some minor grammatical errors. There are a sufficient amount of images, and the tables for both the different galaxies and power ups are well-organized. I also went through the questions and requirements for a Featured Article, and I believe it fit the criteria. This article should definitely be a FA!!

===Oppose===
#{{User|Baby Luigi}} Problems from [[MarioWiki:Featured Articles/Unfeature/N1/Super Mario Galaxy|this]] still persist: the level organization is still a complete unconventional mess. The information for the bosses and levels are still pretty scant; it's merely just a list of what things appear in this thing. The story section is still flowery to an extent.
#{{User|Mario}} Per my reasons to unfeature the article. The gameplay section needs to be divided into chunks, the story writing is substandard, the level table's layout is confusing, the item table is poorly designed (inconsistency with the pictures' backgrounds), the article's organization is bleh (secret Stars coming before the Power Stars are even explained, there is nothing indicating that the basic goal in EVERY level is collecting the Power Star at the end). The gameplay section is probably its worst part of the article, it needs ''more'' details including, but not limited to the versatility of Spin, how to swim, wall-jump, triple jumping, and skating. This article isn't in any good shape to be featured at the time of this writing.

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[[User:PeachRosalinaLeia|PeachRosalinaLeia]] ([[User talk:PeachRosalinaLeia|talk]]) I will do my part to continue to organize and rewrite; if anyone would like to help me (especially by way of images), I would greatly appreciate your help. It is for the good of the wiki...
:Oh I really wish I can fix up all articles on this wiki. I really will do it if I can... {{User:Baby Luigi/sig}} 18:40, 7 February 2015 (EST)

Right now, the only thing I can do is provide answers if you have any questions or comments. My vote is intended to point out the issues, but if you need clarification or details, just ask. {{User:Mario/sig}} 18:42, 7 February 2015 (EST)

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	Right now, the only thing I can do is provide answers if you have any questions or comments. My vote is intended to point out the issues, but if you need clarification or details, just ask. {{User:Mario/sig}} 18:42, 7 February 2015 (EST)		Right now, the only thing I can do is provide answers if you have any questions or comments. My vote is intended to point out the issues, but if you need clarification or details, just ask. {{User:Mario/sig}} 18:42, 7 February 2015 (EST)

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