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#{{User|Time Turner}} I'm not sure if this is intentional, but all of the sections are surprisingly... short. Pretty much every section covering a game is only a few lines long, even in games where he's rather prominent. The number of images is mostly good, though there are a few sections that noticeable lack one. Also, every once in a while, lines like "Diddy is one of twenty-one opponents and his best friend, Donkey Kong, appears as an opponent, too," or "Diddy features a small acceleration and drift bonus while getting a strong mini-turbo bonus," crop up, lines that just sound clunky. I can see that you've put a lot of work into this, but there are still ares where it can be improved. Also, as a forewarning: the featured status of another article does not (at the very least ''should'' not) influence or otherwise affect the featured status of another article. | #{{User|Time Turner}} I'm not sure if this is intentional, but all of the sections are surprisingly... short. Pretty much every section covering a game is only a few lines long, even in games where he's rather prominent. The number of images is mostly good, though there are a few sections that noticeable lack one. Also, every once in a while, lines like "Diddy is one of twenty-one opponents and his best friend, Donkey Kong, appears as an opponent, too," or "Diddy features a small acceleration and drift bonus while getting a strong mini-turbo bonus," crop up, lines that just sound clunky. I can see that you've put a lot of work into this, but there are still ares where it can be improved. Also, as a forewarning: the featured status of another article does not (at the very least ''should'' not) influence or otherwise affect the featured status of another article. | ||
#{{User|Yoshi876}} The gallery violates the [[MarioWiki:Empty | #{{User|Yoshi876}} The gallery violates the [[MarioWiki:Empty Section Policy|policy]] and I say that the trivia is too long. | ||
#{{User|Randombob-omb4761}} Per Yoshi876. | #{{User|Randombob-omb4761}} Per Yoshi876. | ||
#{{User|Dashbot}} - Many sections are very short, Trivia is overly long. This isn't the best to become an featured article. | #{{User|Dashbot}} - Many sections are very short, Trivia is overly long. This isn't the best to become an featured article. | ||
