Editing MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/White Mage

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{{FANOMFAIL
|nominated=23:20, April 26, 2014
|lastedit=23:20, May 26, 2014
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==== Support ====
#{{User|Ashley and Red}} Is a great article, and describes the character (White Mage) perfectly, with no.need of huge sections, tables, etc. Also, I don't see flowery writing, spelling issues or things like that.
#{{User|DaisyLuigi}}
#{{User|Misty}}
#{{User|Pudim}}

==== Oppose ====
#{{User|Mario}} This article is way too short, comparable to [[Baby Donkey Kong]], a successfully unfeatured article, and without sufficient padding, it's difficult to expand beyond this.
#{{User|Yoshi876}} Per Mario, the article is just too small. We failed [[Shigeru Miyamoto]] on size, and the article is smaller than that. The starting section is also too short.

===Removal of Opposes===
'''Mario, Yoshi876, Fandro'''

#{{User|Ashley and Red}} I have expanded the article a lot and it passed both Baby Donkey Kong and Shigeru Miyamoto. 

==== Comments ====
I can expand it by doing sections like ''clothing, phisical description, powers and abilities'' section. What do you think?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}
:Most of it is already covered in the Mario Sports Mix section, so I think it's mostly restating what the article already offers. The biggest problem with White Mage is her appearances relating to the Mario series is extremely limited, and they're in only sports games. That's not enough to make the article substantial. {{User:Mario/sig}} 23:45, 26 April 2014 (EDT)
::Hoe is the article looking now? Suggestions for expanding/fixibg issues?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}

@Ashley, you do know that DasiyLuigi's oppose also deals with the article's size not just the starting section's size? {{User|Yoshi876}}
::Sorry. I didn't payed attention. However, jow is the article looking? Suggestions for expanding/fixing issues?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}

After rewriting the article, I'm afraid it's still too short, and I get the feeling that any expansion would just be padding. {{User|Yoshi876}}
::Uhm, in someway, yes. Can I at least move her clothing/ appearance info from the MSM section tothe actual respective section?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}
:::Yeah, that'd be fine, but it won't have an effect on the size. {{User|Yoshi876}}
::::Ok. How it looks now? Better (doesn't talking about size)?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}
:::::It looks good, but it's still not great. There's no good way to really exceed Baby Donkey Kong and Shigeru Miyamoto article sizes, so no matter what you do, in the end, it's still a short article. Don't take it as a discouragement, though, since we still like a good article. {{User:Mario/sig}} 15:58, 3 May 2014 (EDT)
::::::Yep. I will not take this as discouragement. However, it looks to already passed Baby DK, but not Shigeru Miyamoto{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}
::::::::Uhm, looks like it passed Shigeru Miyamoto too. So?{{User:Ashley anEoTselkie/sig}}
:::::::::I think it's marginal, though, and the article is still too short. :/ {{User:Mario/sig}} 20:53, 9 May 2014 (EDT)