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| ===[[{{#titleparts:{{PAGENAME}}||3}}]]=== | | ===[[{{#titleparts:{{PAGENAME}}||3}}]]=== |
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| |nominated=1:12, 4 October 2012 | | |nominated=1:12, 4 October 2012 |
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| #{{User|Vommack}} Per BLOF(For the time being, at least). | | #{{User|Vommack}} Per BLOF(For the time being, at least). |
| #{{User|Marshal Dan Troop}} The wording seems off in certain areas such as '''But with many strange occurrences, and even the disappearance of a group member, caused all future investigations of the Pyramid to be cancelled, and a newspaper article was published regarding the recent events.''' that sentence feels awkward to read and I think it requires another word at some point, also there are point of view problems such as ''' It comically reads; "STEAKS! EAT AS MUCH AS YOU CAN!!" The game ends with gold bars forming the words THE END.''' who is to say that, that is comical I mean I don't find it funny. There are also other problems with the article including inaccuracies.
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| :::Would you like to do that for me, blof? I'd really appreciate it. {{User|YoshiKong}} | | :::Would you like to do that for me, blof? I'd really appreciate it. {{User|YoshiKong}} |
| ::::I will if I have the time and the motivation. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | | ::::I will if I have the time and the motivation. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} |
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| '''Update:''' I have since re-written the article on [http://www.mariowiki.com/index.php?title=Wario_Land_4&diff=1349998&oldid=1346203 three] [http://www.mariowiki.com/index.php?title=Wario_Land_4&diff=1351415&oldid=1349998 separate] [http://www.mariowiki.com/index.php?title=Wario_Land_4&diff=next&oldid=1351415 occasions]. I admit that I did find some silly mistakes and a few issues with the wording here and there. But as of now it has been thoroughly looked over, and I believe that the opposing arguments no longer apply. If there are any more concerns, please let me know and I'll tend to them as soon as possible. {{User|YoshiKong}}
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| *"[G]eneral thrill of satisfaction". It's improved, yes, but if mistakes that have been specifically brought up by Glowsquid-in the Intro paragraph, no less-haven't been fixed, I doubt it's ready for an FA.{{User|Vommack}}
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| ::So, do you want me to remove the review stuff entirely from the intro? I can't see anything wrong with the wording. {{User|YoshiKong}} 15:35, 11 November 2012 (EST)
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